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Posted at: 6/4/09 02:37 PM

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waaa!
Im desperate to see this togheter Dx
its all looking so good x3
glad its almostly done :P

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Yeah, sorry about the lack of updates, its not that I dropped out or anything. Part 11 has a lot of separate pieces of background parts going on, and it needs to be compiled together to really have anything to show. Its being worked on though, just one piece at a time.

Don't know why, I always find the need to really overwork the backgrounds way more than what most people do. I've noticed that with a lot of my Flash stuff.

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At 6/4/09 02:37 PM, PinkSkull wrote: waaa!
Im desperate to see this togheter Dx
its all looking so good x3
glad its almostly done :P

yea. This collab is going to look amazing when it's all put together.

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At 6/6/09 09:08 AM, YoinK wrote: yea. This collab is going to look amazing when it's all put together.

Hey, congrats on the level up. That gold hammer looks badass on you.

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At 6/6/09 10:30 AM, RazorHawk wrote:
At 6/6/09 09:08 AM, YoinK wrote: yea. This collab is going to look amazing when it's all put together.
Hey, congrats on the level up. That gold hammer looks badass on you.

thanks, I've thought up a great idea for part 36. now I just have to get working on it. :D

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Posted at: 6/7/09 02:44 AM

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Whatever it is yoink, im sure it'll be great, and grats on your level up! that golden hammer looks badass!

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howdy there. well its been like over a years since I've done a collab and this has my interest. If its okay I'll take part 32 ;)

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Part 11 Complete

And its on its way to your email, ShortMonkey. We're getting there.

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Posted at: 6/7/09 07:33 PM

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Razor, that background looks amazing but the character design seems lacking. Just a thought. Otherwise, the scene was rockin'.


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At 6/7/09 07:33 PM, IanShine wrote: Razor, that background looks amazing but the character design seems lacking. Just a thought. Otherwise, the scene was rockin'.

I'm guessing you mean the guy who gets shot in the head at the end? I guess I could try detailing that part a little more, upload again, and see if everyone else thinks it worth it, or if the difference there isn't enough to resend the entire thing. The outlines did end up being a little thicker than I would have liked, but I didn't think that would be a big deal. That can be easily fixed though.

Let me give it a shot. From what I can see, the remaining collab parts are all taken up anyway.

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Actually I thought that part was alright. I was talking specifically about the dude hiding around the corner with the M16/4 (can't tell). He just seems like he was thrown together in a couple seconds (his figure is very blocky)


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At 6/7/09 08:16 PM, IanShine wrote: Actually I thought that part was alright. I was talking specifically about the dude hiding around the corner with the M16/4 (can't tell). He just seems like he was thrown together in a couple seconds (his figure is very blocky)

Its an SG552.

Well, maybe the chin could be rounded a bit more, but that's really the only thing I see. But honestly, I didn't think it was that bad.

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At 6/7/09 07:18 PM, RazorHawk wrote: Part 11 Complete

And its on its way to your email, ShortMonkey. We're getting there.

dude, thats fucking awsome!


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I dunno, it just stuck out, probably because the rest of the design was so awesome. Whatevs.


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At 6/7/09 08:56 PM, IanShine wrote: I dunno, it just stuck out, probably because the rest of the design was so awesome. Whatevs.

Thanks. But anyway, here is it with a little plastic surgery:

Part 11

It does look a bit better, but truthfully, I don't think that many people would notice it. But whatever, I'll resend this.

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At 6/7/09 11:17 PM, RazorHawk wrote:
Thanks. But anyway, here is it with a little plastic surgery:

Part 11

It does look a bit better, but truthfully, I don't think that many people would notice it. But whatever, I'll resend this.

Very nice! I love the amount of action going on in the background. It gives the piece many more elements to enjoy. And even if most people don't notice the little things, it is the people that do that counts. Look at it this way. If people watch your work a lot because they like it, eventually they will start to see little things that urk them. If you give them less and less little things to pick at, than you have happier fans.

Again, awsome part. Now I just have to finish mine.

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I'm liking the enthusiasm from everyone!

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If there are two names, it means they are competing for the part. Also, this is cutthroat. If you want a part that is already taken, you may compete for the part. May the best animator win.

Part 1 - PinkSkull***
Part 2 - iceimp***
Part 3 - iceimp ***
Part 4 - YoinK***
Part 5 - YoinK (finishing Feuse's part 5)***
Part 6 - Master-Samus***
Part 7 - OnyxcCross***
Part 8 - Feuse***
Part 9 - Feuse***
Part 10 -
Part 11 - RazorHawk***
Part 12 - Snicp***
Part 13 - PinkSkull***
Part 14 - Master-Samus
Part 15 - YoinK***
Part 16 - Snicp***
Part 17 - ColdReaver***
Part 18 - dirtshake***
Part 19 - Kibbl3s
Part 20 - dirtshake***
Part 21 - ColdReaver***
Part 22 - YoinK***
Part 23 - Penboy***
Part 24 - ShortMonkey
Part 25 - Megamouse24
Part 26 - NoperDoperTrooper***
Part 27 - RazorHawk***
Part 28 - Master-Samus
Part 29 - Feuse***/Master-Samus
Part 30 - Feuse***
Part 31 - dirtshake
Part 32 - studio-nightbird
Part 33 - PinkSkull***
Part 34 - cHunter
Part 35 - Kibbl3s***
Part 36 - YoinK
Part 37 - ColdReaver***
Part 38 - PinkSkull***
Part 39 -
Part 40 - Master-Samus
Part 41 - PinkSkull***
Part 42 - ShortMonkey


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At 6/8/09 01:13 AM, dirtshake wrote: Very nice! I love the amount of action going on in the background. It gives the piece many more elements to enjoy. And even if most people don't notice the little things, it is the people that do that counts. Look at it this way. If people watch your work a lot because they like it, eventually they will start to see little things that urk them. If you give them less and less little things to pick at, than you have happier fans.

Again, awsome part. Now I just have to finish mine.

Good advice, thanks amigo. Yeah, sometimes its not that bad of a thing to be a bit of a perfectionist at times. As long as it doesn't take forever. Anyway, thanks again, man, and good luck with your part. Looking forward to seeing it in action.

And ShortMonkey, sign me up for Part 10. We're getting so close, we just got to keep going here.

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At 6/8/09 01:28 AM, ShortMonkey wrote: I'm liking the enthusiasm from everyone!

Update!

*** = Done and sent

-_- = on the verge of being removed (if you are that person, please reply in this thread so I know you're still alive)

If there are two names, it means they are competing for the part. Also, this is cutthroat. If you want a part that is already taken, you may compete for the part. May the best animator win.
Part 30 - Feuse***
Part 31 - dirtshake

: Part 32 - studio-nightbird

yeaaa i've got the part. I'll do my best ;)

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At 6/8/09 09:43 PM, studio-nightbird wrote:
Part 30 - Feuse***
Part 31 - dirtshake
Part 32 - studio-nightbird
yeaaa i've got the part. I'll do my best ;)

I'm so glad you joined us studio-nightbird. I'm a huge fan of your flash work. :D

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Hey guys i did part 10 outa bordem lol. anyway ya i really should tell u when im making them before but oh well i hate making people wait. so ya i did part 10 here u go ill send it soon!

http://img195.imageshack.us/i/part10.swf /

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At 6/9/09 08:48 PM, iceimp wrote: Hey guys i did part 10 outa bordem lol. anyway ya i really should tell u when im making them before but oh well i hate making people wait. so ya i did part 10 here u go ill send it soon!

http://img195.imageshack.us/i/part10.swf /

Damn that looks good! The visuals are fantastic without a doubt.

I can take Part 39 instead.

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Oh so sorry... aha i didnt notice you took the part.. aha thanks i felt i needed a after match of my first 2 parts.

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At 6/9/09 10:45 PM, iceimp wrote: Oh so sorry... aha i didnt notice you took the part.. aha thanks i felt i needed a after match of my first 2 parts.

No big deal, I hadn't even gotten started on that one yet, so it all works out in the end.

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Update!

*** = Done and sent

-_- = on the verge of being removed (if you are that person, please reply in this thread so I know you're still alive)

If there are two names, it means they are competing for the part. Also, this is cutthroat. If you want a part that is already taken, you may compete for the part. May the best animator win.

Part 1 - PinkSkull***
Part 2 - iceimp***
Part 3 - iceimp ***
Part 4 - YoinK***
Part 5 - YoinK & Feuse***
Part 6 - Master-Samus***
Part 7 - OnyxcCross***
Part 8 - Feuse***
Part 9 - Feuse***
Part 10 - iceimp***
Part 11 - RazorHawk***
Part 12 - Snicp***
Part 13 - PinkSkull***
Part 14 - Master-Samus
Part 15 - YoinK***
Part 16 - Snicp***
Part 17 - ColdReaver***
Part 18 - dirtshake***
Part 19 -
Part 20 - dirtshake***
Part 21 - ColdReaver***
Part 22 - YoinK***
Part 23 - Penboy***
Part 24 - ShortMonkey
Part 25 -
Part 26 - NoperDoperTrooper***
Part 27 - RazorHawk***
Part 28 - Master-Samus
Part 29 - Feuse***/Master-Samus
Part 30 - Feuse***
Part 31 - dirtshake
Part 32 - studio-nightbird
Part 33 - PinkSkull***
Part 34 -
Part 35 - Kibbl3s***
Part 36 - YoinK
Part 37 - ColdReaver***
Part 38 - PinkSkull***
Part 39 - RazorHawk
Part 40 - Master-Samus
Part 41 - PinkSkull***
Part 42 - ShortMonkey


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At 6/9/09 08:48 PM, iceimp wrote: Hey guys i did part 10 outa bordem lol. anyway ya i really should tell u when im making them before but oh well i hate making people wait. so ya i did part 10 here u go ill send it soon!

http://img195.imageshack.us/i/part10.swf /

I think it would look better if the mouth opened up more for the "pray" part, and maybe have the eyes close to really show some feeling to it.

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At 6/10/09 11:50 AM, YoinK wrote: I think it would look better if the mouth opened up more for the "pray" part, and maybe have the eyes close to really show some feeling to it.

Like this?

Also, here's my part. Any suggestions?


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I'm so glad you joined us studio-nightbird. I'm a huge fan of your flash work. :D

Glad to be here. Its been a while since I've done a collab. and a long time since I've worked on the same project as you ;). also one hosted by Shortmonkey ;)

my part still under construction no previews ;)

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At 6/10/09 08:02 PM, studio-nightbird wrote: Glad to be here. Its been a while since I've done a collab. and a long time since I've worked on the same project as you ;). also one hosted by Shortmonkey ;)

Ah, I remember you. You did some ultra awesome work for some of my unfinished collabs. At least you were able to put them into other collabs so your work was not wasted.


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