Forum Topic: "Prayer" by Disturbed - Collab!

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and i came up with an idea for part 12 as well
http://spamtheweb.com/ul/upload/110109/2 8620_part12.php


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Here's my take on part 20. It's a work in progress, obviously, but it's coming along. Thoughts?


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At 1/11/09 06:54 PM, TazarTheYoot wrote: Alright, I've got it. I can transfer my idea from part 8 to part 20 with minimal effort. Has somebody submitted something amazingly unbeatable for part 20?

Here is the current part 20.


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At 1/11/09 08:52 PM, TazarTheYoot wrote: Oh, the link. Yeah.

http://spamtheweb.com/ul/upload/110109/7 1682_part_20.php

Great idea and sketch... but the final graphics will have to be better (I'm not sure if you intended the graphics in there to be a sketch or final graphics).


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They'll be final graphics. The only bit that I've finalized so far is the demon thingy's head.


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At 1/11/09 08:51 PM, TazarTheYoot wrote: Here's my take on part 20. It's a work in progress, obviously, but it's coming along. Thoughts?

STOP TRYING TO STEAL MY PART!!!! RAWR!!!!
(insert angry noises here)

On a serious note, I actually like the concept. Different than mine obviously, but I do like it. Good luck with it. May the best animator win. =P

I guess that means I'm going to have to work extra hard on Part 18.

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I think it would be smarter to compete for a part that isn't finished yet.

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They should make a black guy the manager, they know how to run shit!
2 Girls 1 Cup .... THE SONG!!!!


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MESSAGE TO SHORTMONKEY:
Did you get my part? Well, if yes, I wanna change my logo on the part. ;)
I'll send the fla. and you'll change it perhaps?

MESSAGE TO COLLABERS:

Good luck with the rest! I am amazed by PinkSkull and ColdReaver, awesome!
Also thanks to YoinK for commenting on my news posts ;D

-OnyxCross


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BY THE WAAAAAY.
Check this out. :)

http://onyxcross.newgrounds.com/news/pos t/252269


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At 1/9/09 09:01 PM, dirtshake wrote: Finals are coming up, but I managed to get a lot of work done today on Part 18. I'm going to try to get more done this weekend during breaks from studying and more this week when I have half days.

http://spamtheweb.com/ul/upload/090109/7 5459_part18.php

Comments appreciated.

Also, awesome job to everyone so far. This thing is looking sweet. =D

Dirtshake, It's lookin good man! there's no shortage of frame by frame in your parts and that's what makes them great

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Bleah, I hate to do this, I really do man. But have to drop out of this collab, I'm already stretched thin when it comes to projects, adding this to the list was a mistake. Good luck though, PM me when its done so I can vote 5.


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Yeah, I get what you're saying, Yoink, but that part is the only one I've got any sort of idea or inspiration for. It's kinda either that part or none for me. :/

Haha, alright Dirtshake, may the best animator win.


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At 1/12/09 10:57 AM, OnyxCross wrote: MESSAGE TO SHORTMONKEY:
Did you get my part? Well, if yes, I wanna change my logo on the part. ;)
I'll send the fla. and you'll change it perhaps?

Just send me the .fla with the logo but it must have the same symbol name as the other logo. That way I can replace the old logo with the new one by a simple copy and paste.

*** = Done and sent

-_- = on the verge of being removed (if you are that person, please reply in this thread so I know you're still alive)

If there are two names, it means they are competing for the part. Also, this is cutthroat. If you want a part that is already taken, you may compete for the part. May the best animator win.

Update:

Part 1 - PinkSkull***
Part 2 - iceimp***
Part 3 - iceimp***
Part 4 - YoinK***
Part 5 - Feuse
Part 6 - Master-Samus***
Part 7 - OnyxcCross
Part 8 - Feuse***
Part 9 - Feuse***
Part 10 - MarsYam
Part 11 - corruptedtodeath
Part 12 - Snicp
Part 13 - PinkSkull***
Part 14 - Master-Samus
Part 15 - YoinK
Part 16 - Snicp***
Part 17 - ColdReaver
Part 18 - dirtshake
Part 19 - Kibbl3s***
Part 20 - dirtshake***/TazarTheYoot
Part 21 - ColdReaver***
Part 22 - YoinK***
Part 23 - Penboy***
Part 24 - ShortMonkey
Part 25 - ShortMonkey
Part 26 - NoperDoperTrooper***
Part 27 - Penboy
Part 28 - Master-Samus
Part 29 - Feuse***/Master-Samus
Part 30 - Feuse***
Part 31 -
Part 32 - TheEmoKiller
Part 33 - PinkSkull
Part 34 - cHunter-_-
Part 35 - Kibbl3s***/CybermonkeyStudios-_-
Part 36 - barrab
Part 37 - ColdReaver***
Part 38 - PinkSkull
Part 39 - Wasim-_-
Part 40 - Master-Samus
Part 41 - PinkSkull
Part 42 - ShortMonkey


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I've started working on Part 15. It's going to be epic.

Kanye West Did What??????
They should make a black guy the manager, they know how to run shit!
2 Girls 1 Cup .... THE SONG!!!!


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Good luck with the rest! I am amazed by PinkSkull and ColdReaver, awesome!

ME? wow thanks :3

well, here its part 33 pseudo-finished.. : http://spamtheweb.com/ul/upload/120109/7 6723_disturbedcollab_part33.php
anything i should fix before sending?

And YAY! just one empty part!
Everybody else's work is awesoem really, im excited about seeing it all together :D

La vida no tiene sentido xD

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At 1/12/09 11:22 PM, PinkSkull wrote:
Good luck with the rest! I am amazed by PinkSkull and ColdReaver, awesome!
ME? wow thanks :3

well, here its part 33 pseudo-finished.. : http://spamtheweb.com/ul/upload/120109/7 6723_disturbedcollab_part33.php
anything i should fix before sending?

And YAY! just one empty part!
Everybody else's work is awesoem really, im excited about seeing it all together :D

maybe have the grid lines move on the part in which he's running? For example... the semi-vertical lines... have them move to the left making it look like he's running on that surface.

As for part 15, I plan on having it a 4 perspective part and as much frame by frame as possible. :)

Kanye West Did What??????
They should make a black guy the manager, they know how to run shit!
2 Girls 1 Cup .... THE SONG!!!!


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At 1/12/09 11:22 PM, PinkSkull wrote: anything i should fix before sending?

That's looking great! I love the effects at the end with the grid lines. It still needs a bit of tidying though, such as the outline of the main character... and possibly eyes?


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maybe have the grid lines move on the part in which he's running? For example... the semi-vertical lines... have them move to the left making it look like he's running on that surface.

RIGHT! how could i forget that? ;D

such as the outline of the main character...

i change it color? or what do you mean?

and possibly eyes?

well, it is supposed to be that way, y'know, the blank face is part of the style
But if you think it'd be better with eyes i'll add eyes, but i'd need to add eyes to the other parts as well..

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At 1/13/09 04:45 PM, PinkSkull wrote: i change it color? or what do you mean?

Colour is good. Just it looks a bit messy at times. :)


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I think no eyes is fine to that part if you ask me. It gives your parts a unique artistic look.

Kanye West Did What??????
They should make a black guy the manager, they know how to run shit!
2 Girls 1 Cup .... THE SONG!!!!


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Here's my part 20 so far. I had to set the glow to low for this so it wouldn't lag majorly, but I'm sure on a final version with a preloader and such it'd work fine on high quality. Let me know if it's still lagging, my computer's being a little screwy so I can't really tell.

http://spamtheweb.com/ul/upload/130109/6 9237_part_20.php

Any opinions? Things I should change? D'you think a red glow would look better or worse than purple?


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WIP for Part 18.

I'm trying to animate a little bit everyday during finals week. This is what I was able to get done before study time.

I realize the hands look horrible. I suck at drawing hands. But thanks to this tutorial I just found I will be re-drawing them the next time I work on the part.

If it is possible I would also like to try my hands at Part 31, the final part open for this collab. I have a good idea I would like to try out for it.

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At 1/13/09 08:10 PM, TazarTheYoot wrote: Here's my part 20 so far. I had to set the glow to low for this so it wouldn't lag majorly, but I'm sure on a final version with a preloader and such it'd work fine on high quality. Let me know if it's still lagging, my computer's being a little screwy so I can't really tell.

http://spamtheweb.com/ul/upload/130109/6 9237_part_20.php

Any opinions? Things I should change? D'you think a red glow would look better or worse than purple?

I don't think that will be good enough to beat dirtshake's part 20. Dirtshake's part shows the perfect scared emotion from a shadow type figure.... But I do like the style you chose for that purple glowing character Tazar. If your part doesn't beat dirtshake's part... maybe you could use that character for part 39 or 34 since those parts aren't finished and those users seem inactive.

and dirtshake, This guy has some really good drawing tutorials. Jazza...
http://www.youtube.com/view_play_list?p=
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Kanye West Did What??????
They should make a black guy the manager, they know how to run shit!
2 Girls 1 Cup .... THE SONG!!!!


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At 1/13/09 11:08 PM, YoinK wrote: and dirtshake, This guy has some really good drawing tutorials. Jazza...
http://www.youtube.com/view_play_list?p=
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I've seen Jazza's tutorials before. I was actually very glad I found them after watching his movies. I've adopted his construct idea in my animation, and it helps a lot when drawing anything, from simple poses to more complicated poses, such as fight animations. Sometimes I roughly animate a movement in the construct and then animate over it with finer detail.

Thanks for the props to my part by the way. Your parts look awesome too, and your new movie rocked.

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I cleaned up the sticking out lines and filled those little unfilled squares..
preview: http://spamtheweb.com/ul/upload/150109/6 0101_disturbedcollab_part33.php
feedback?

only two more to go :)

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At 1/15/09 06:42 PM, PinkSkull wrote: I cleaned up the sticking out lines and filled those little unfilled squares..
preview: http://spamtheweb.com/ul/upload/150109/6 0101_disturbedcollab_part33.php
feedback?

only two more to go :)

That looks perfect to me. Nice work PinkSkull. :)

Kanye West Did What??????
They should make a black guy the manager, they know how to run shit!
2 Girls 1 Cup .... THE SONG!!!!


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At 1/15/09 06:42 PM, PinkSkull wrote: I cleaned up the sticking out lines and filled those little unfilled squares..
preview: http://spamtheweb.com/ul/upload/150109/6 0101_disturbedcollab_part33.php
feedback?

only two more to go :)

Yup, looks great! Send me the .fla please!


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http://spamtheweb.com/ul/upload/160109/1 796_prayer_yoink_part15.php
Part 15 so far. It's going to have 3 more perspectives.

Kanye West Did What??????
They should make a black guy the manager, they know how to run shit!
2 Girls 1 Cup .... THE SONG!!!!


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At 1/16/09 12:30 AM, YoinK wrote: http://spamtheweb.com/ul/upload/160109/1 796_prayer_yoink_part15.php
Part 15 so far. It's going to have 3 more perspectives.

Looking great!


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