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At 12/24/08 04:17 AM, ShortMonkey wrote: No offense, but that looks pretty terrible. You're going to have to fix it all, but if you're going to have next to no animation and just a camera shaking, the graphics better be damn good. If you don't fix it dramatically, it won't be accepted.

Damn, okay then I'm out.

At 12/24/08 04:17 AM, ShortMonkey wrote:

At 12/23/08 10:01 PM, Elemental-Sword wrote: I know I was waiting for someone to post so I wasn't triple posting

http://spamtheweb.com/ul/upload/3508/673 66_disturbed_collab_Elemental-Sword.php

No offense, but that looks pretty terrible. You're going to have to fix it all, but if you're going to have next to no animation and just a camera shaking, the graphics better be damn good. If you don't fix it dramatically, it won't be accepted.

No kidding. It looks like you slapped this together in 10 minutes. Put some effort into it, actually animate it and put in some detail. I'm not trying to be rude, but this can be much MUCH better than it already is, if you put in alittle bit more time and effort.

At 12/24/08 07:29 PM, ColdReaver wrote:
No kidding. It looks like you slapped this together in 10 minutes. Put some effort into it, actually animate it and put in some detail. I'm not trying to be rude, but this can be much MUCH better than it already is, if you put in alittle bit more time and effort.

It took me 4 and a half hours...

I've already said I'm out, but let me say this too: I'm not a very skilled drawer. It takes me at least 15 minutes to get a hand to look like a hand. If that doesn't meet your standards than I'm out. I guess I'll just have to practice when I have time. (fucking APUSH Homework)

Sorry man, I'm not trying to be an asshole or anything, I'm just saying it takes time to make something good. There's no need to rush, none of us here have finished a part in 4 hours, we've all taken several days, maybe even a week or two to finish a part

At 12/24/08 07:59 PM, ColdReaver wrote: Sorry man, I'm not trying to be an asshole or anything, I'm just saying it takes time to make something good. There's no need to rush, none of us here have finished a part in 4 hours, we've all taken several days, maybe even a week or two to finish a part

well I still can't continue cause I have lots of homework so like I said before when I get time (summer) I'll practice a lot more and maybe join some other collab. So later...

At 12/24/08 08:27 PM, Elemental-Sword wrote: well I still can't continue cause I have lots of homework so like I said before when I get time (summer) I'll practice a lot more and maybe join some other collab. So later...

Well ok then, I just wanted put my point across and I'm glad you got it.

*BUMP*

Merry Christmas everyone!

MERRY CHRISTMAS GUYS!

There are a lot of posts D: I feel I shall show you what i have, truth is, it isn't much, i pseudo-redid part 13, since it was looking awful, and hopfully will have it done by tomorrow/saturday, and i did some spinning wolves xD I'm getting back to animation mood now, so it'll all end up correctly :D

http://spamtheweb.com/ul/upload/3708/767 45_disturbedcollab.php

MERRY CHRISTMAS!!

Looking good, PinkSkull!

Update!

*** = Done and sent

-_- = on the verge of being removed (if you are that person, please reply in this thread so I know you're still alive)

If there are two names, it means they are competing for the part. Also, this is cutthroat. If you want a part that is already taken, you may compete for the part. May the best animator win.

Update:

Part 1 - PinkSkull***
Part 2 -
Part 3 -
Part 4 - YoinK
Part 5 -
Part 6 - Master-Samus***
Part 7 - OnyxcCross
Part 8 - Feuse***
Part 9 - Feuse***
Part 10 -
Part 11 - corruptedtodeath
Part 12 -
Part 13 - PinkSkull
Part 14 - Master-Samus
Part 15 - YoinK
Part 16 -
Part 17 - ColdReaver
Part 18 - dirtshake
Part 19 - Kibbl3s***
Part 20 - dirtshake***
Part 21 - ColdReaver***
Part 22 - YoinK***
Part 23 - Penboy***
Part 24 - ShortMonkey
Part 25 - ShortMonkey
Part 26 - NoperDoperTrooper***
Part 27 - Penboy
Part 28 - Master-Samus
Part 29 - Feuse***/Master-Samus
Part 30 - Feuse***
Part 31 - Ferris95
Part 32 - TheEmoKiller
Part 33 - PinkSkull
Part 34 - cHunter
Part 35 - Kibbl3s***/CybermonkeyStudios
Part 36 - barrab
Part 37 - ColdReaver
Part 38 - PinkSkull
Part 39 - Wasim
Part 40 - Master-Samus
Part 41 - PinkSkull
Part 42 - ShortMonkey

At 12/25/08 11:20 PM, PinkSkull wrote: http://spamtheweb.com/ul/upload/3708/767 45_disturbedcollab.php

PinkSkull!!! that spinning wolves part is amazing! Looking good. :-)

Thanks!

Well, here is part 13, completed wannabe

http://spamtheweb.com/ul/upload/3908/780 21_disturbedcollab_part13.php

I'm not very convinced by it but im not really sure what else to add, etc. Please tell me if there is anything i shall fix before sending.
Next part will be better. :)

At 12/27/08 11:41 PM, PinkSkull wrote: Well, here is part 13, completed wannabe

Wow, he can see the wolves without having eyes! :D

Hehe, looks great PinkSkull. <3

:)

At 12/27/08 11:41 PM, PinkSkull wrote: I'm not very convinced by it but im not really sure what else to add, etc. Please tell me if there is anything i shall fix before sending.

Lookin' great! The trees are too simple to go with the rest of the good art though... fix the trees. :)

Hey there everyone!

Just posting something to tell you that I'm still alive in this collab, my part is going okay, something about 25% done. Hope you all get your parts done well and I hope this will get atleast 4.10/5.00 XD.

-Onyxcross

IM ALIVEEEE

At 12/28/08 04:42 AM, OnyxCross wrote: Hey there everyone!

I hope this will get atleast 4.10/5.00 XD.

-Onyxcross

I'm pretty sure that it will =)
Still workin hard at my parts too

At 12/28/08 04:42 AM, OnyxCross wrote: I hope this will get atleast 4.10/5.00 XD.

I hope and expect that it will get a higher score than that. XD

Lookin' great! The trees are too simple to go with the rest of the good art though... fix the trees. :)

Understood captain! Fixing the trees ASAP!

Is it better now?
http://spamtheweb.com/ul/upload/4008/855 16_disturbedcollab_part13.php

Anything for the betterness of the collab!

At 12/29/08 01:45 AM, PinkSkull wrote: Is it better now?
http://spamtheweb.com/ul/upload/4008/855 16_disturbedcollab_part13.php

Anything for the betterness of the collab!

Much better! Just get rid of that white line that pops down at the bottom, and the trees at the end of the scene must look similar to the awesome trees at the beginning for consistency.

Also, starting from tomorrow, I'll be gone for 4 days. So don't freak out if I'm not posting. ;)

I'm going to take care of the list while shortmonkey is away.
What do you guys think of this?
http://spamtheweb.com/ul/upload/4208/411 29_prayer_yoink_part4.php

Alright, uhh..
4.30/5.00 then ? Nevermind that, I need advice.

Ideas for the part
1. Dark killer defeats a guy with a gun (Dramatic and effects)
or
2. Guitarist plays and singer sings. (Hardcore melody with effects)

Thanks, oh and YoinK. About your part, when the guy jumps in the portal, make it that the portal closes and the screen goes white. Just an advice.

-Onyxcross

At 12/30/08 01:06 PM, OnyxCross wrote: Alright, uhh..
4.30/5.00 then ? Nevermind that, I need advice.

Ideas for the part
1. Dark killer defeats a guy with a gun (Dramatic and effects)
or
2. Guitarist plays and singer sings. (Hardcore melody with effects)

Thanks, oh and YoinK. About your part, when the guy jumps in the portal, make it that the portal closes and the screen goes white. Just an advice.

-Onyxcross

thanks Onyxcross. I think it looks looks better now.
http://spamtheweb.com/ul/upload/4208/495 62_prayer_yoink_part4.php

As for your part... yea a small fight scene or something to that extent would be perfect.

Ok, I got alittle more work into part 37 yesterday, so here's the progress. Almost done, just gotta do two more clips and that's it =)
I might have to add a few more frames into the background movieclip, cause it looks like it's going alittle fast. Any suggestions?

http://spamtheweb.com/ul/upload/4208/511 73_Disturbed_Collab_part_37.swf

Oops, hehe, here's the right link

http://spamtheweb.com/ul/upload/4208/519 67_Disturbed_Collab_part_37.php

At 12/30/08 02:27 PM, ColdReaver wrote: Oops, hehe, here's the right link

http://spamtheweb.com/ul/upload/4208/519 67_Disturbed_Collab_part_37.php

That part is badass ColdReaver! I don't know how you do it... but you do it well. Nice looking part!

At 12/30/08 02:01 PM, YoinK wrote: thanks Onyxcross. I think it looks looks better now.
http://spamtheweb.com/ul/upload/4208/495 62_prayer_yoink_part4.php

As for your part... yea a small fight scene or something to that extent would be perfect.

Yeah, NOW your part looks swell.

Fighting, eh? Well, okay, I'll try.

ohhh mann =[

i thought this collab is gonna be finished before 2009,,

i wanted 3 submissions on 2003 =[

At 12/30/08 09:27 PM, Feuse wrote: ohhh mann =[

i thought this collab is gonna be finished before 2009,,

i wanted 3 submissions on 2003 =[

yea well... we still have open parts... but we're putting up quality parts. This is very key to a successful collab.

At 12/30/08 03:09 PM, OnyxCross wrote: Yeah, NOW your part looks swell.

Fighting, eh? Well, okay, I'll try.

thanks dude, can't wait to see what you come up with. :)

I'll take part 10!
And all the other parts look really promising!