Forum Topic: "Prayer" by Disturbed - Collab!

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At 11/26/08 08:22 AM, Feuse wrote: UPDATE.

http://spamtheweb.com/ul/upload/3708/551 81_COLAB_SKETCH3.php

For the "this is the way I pray" part... maybe have some guy jump out of a helicopter? But change perspectives at least twice for that.

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lol yonik ur idea is kinda same to mine!:3

cuz the story is:

the tanks shoots a man..

and when the song goes "this is the way i prayyyyyyyyyyyy"

he jumps out from the smoke,

burns the tank,

and then the song says "burning alive insiideeeeee"

the guy inside the tank will burn :3

WE NO NEED NO WATER LET THE MODFCA BURN.

IM HERE RELAX.


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thats looking great Feuse.

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I did some work on the menu. What do you guys think?

thats looking great! i like it, lol.

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At 11/26/08 09:42 AM, Feuse wrote: lol yonik ur idea is kinda same to mine!:3

cuz the story is:

the tanks shoots a man..

and when the song goes "this is the way i prayyyyyyyyyyyy"

he jumps out from the smoke,

burns the tank,

and then the song says "burning alive insiideeeeee"

the guy inside the tank will burn :3

WE NO NEED NO WATER LET THE MODFCA BURN.

oh that's an even better idea! Keep at it dude. You have some great animations skills! I'll get working on Part 4 later today. But for now I have to be at work.

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thx man.

and on part:

Part 29 - Feuse/Master-Samus
Part 30 - Feuse

im done and set there soo... ***

IM HERE RELAX.


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At 11/26/08 01:16 PM, Feuse wrote: Part 29 - Feuse/Master-Samus
Part 30 - Feuse

im done and set there soo... ***

Send them to sprint-air@hotmail.com - btw, those sketches looked great!

YoinK, it's alright, I got the NG API ads working

http://spamtheweb.com/ul/upload/3808/349 23_Prayer_Finished.php


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At 11/26/08 05:43 PM, ShortMonkey wrote: YoinK, it's alright, I got the NG API ads working

http://spamtheweb.com/ul/upload/3808/349 23_Prayer_Finished.php

excellent. The ad definitely works now! :)

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At 11/26/08 05:53 PM, YoinK wrote: excellent. The ad definitely works now! :)

Yep! Thanks for your help. Also, I'm sure your tutorial could get quite famous... if Tom finds it he may make a NG news post about it to stop people from constantly asking him and Psycho questions about it.

Anyway, some info was incorrect in the last update - I'm just gonna fix it now and get it done with so I don't forget by the time page 18 comes along:

*** = Done and sent

-_- = on the verge of being removed (if you are that person, please reply in this thread so I know you're still alive)

If there are two names, it means they are competing for the part. Also, I'm gonna make this cutthroat, if you want a part that is already taken, you may compete for the part. May the best animator win.

Update:

Part 1 - PinkSkull
Part 2 -
Part 3 -
Part 4 - YoinK
Part 5 -
Part 6 - Master-Samus***
Part 7 - Djmr-_-
Part 8 - Djmr-_-/Feuse
Part 9 - Feuse
Part 10 - Feuse
Part 11 - Feuse
Part 12 - Feuse
Part 13 - PinkSkull
Part 14 - Master-Samus
Part 15 - iRicochet-_-
Part 16 - iRicochet-_-
Part 17 - ColdReaver
Part 18 -
Part 19 - Kibbl3s***
Part 20 - dirtshake***
Part 21 - ColdReaver***
Part 22 - YoinK***
Part 23 - Penboy
Part 24 - ShortMonkey
Part 25 -
Part 26 - NoperDoperTrooper***
Part 27 - Penboy
Part 28 - Master-Samus
Part 29 - Feuse/Master-Samus
Part 30 - Feuse
Part 31 -
Part 32 - TheEmoKiller-_-
Part 33 - PinkSkull
Part 34 - cHunter
Part 35 - Kibbl3s***
Part 36 -
Part 37 - ColdReaver
Part 38 - PinkSkull
Part 39 - Wasim
Part 40 - Master-Samus
Part 41 - PinkSkull
Part 42 - ShortMonkey

Finally, what do you guys think of my part? Well, so far :P


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So on the list on page 16 it said part 35 was free, same with the other most recent list, which is why I requested the part. But now it says part 35 is taken and completed already by kibbles, so whats the deal?

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i had part 31 but about 2 weeks ago i traded for part 35 and finished the part, he just had not updated it for a while. you can still go for part 35, if ur part is better than mine its all yours :)

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That still is kinda annoying, I chose part 35 so I wouldn't accidentally take anyone else's, nor have mine excluded. But oh well, we'll see.

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At 11/26/08 08:46 PM, CybermonkeyStudios wrote: That still is kinda annoying, I chose part 35 so I wouldn't accidentally take anyone else's, nor have mine excluded. But oh well, we'll see.

maybe you could use your part for another open part instead???
http://spamtheweb.com/ul/upload/3708/834 42_prayer_yoink_part4.php
what do you think of this part so far??? Needs more frame by frame though... I'll try to do the rest with frame by frame.

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looking good.

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At 11/26/08 08:46 PM, CybermonkeyStudios wrote: That still is kinda annoying, I chose part 35 so I wouldn't accidentally take anyone else's, nor have mine excluded. But oh well, we'll see.

Sorry about that. Hey, you can always compete against the part - it's all cutthroat. Here is the existing part 35. If you think you can beat that, go ahead.

Also, I do apologize to everybody in advance who does lose these competitions. This collab isn't just for the fun and giggles, I'm taking this seriously. But still, that doesn't take away the fun from animating it, even if your part isn't accepted.

At 11/26/08 11:11 PM, YoinK wrote: maybe you could use your part for another open part instead???

Cybermonkey, you could do that too. ;)

what do you think of this part so far??? Needs more frame by frame though... I'll try to do the rest with frame by frame.

Even though hardly anything is done, that looks very slick. I really like it!


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Alright, bios page is done! What do you guys think? And that box on the top left is where you put your drawing - like the background? Yes, I created it in Flash and Photoshop. Also, remember to actually click on "Bios" in the menu ;)


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At 11/27/08 07:03 AM, ShortMonkey wrote: Alright, bios page is done! What do you guys think? And that box on the top left is where you put your drawing - like the background? Yes, I created it in Flash and Photoshop. Also, remember to actually click on "Bios" in the menu ;)

nice, only thing is that I noticed you spelled "organizer" wrong.
you should also probably put "stop all sounds" for the first frame of the .fla because if I keep clicking through the bio buttons the music overlaps. Other than that.. it looks good. We just need to complete our parts now. Your part looked good so far SM.

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i love the opening for the menu, bios page is looking nice, good job SM.

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At 11/27/08 09:53 AM, YoinK wrote: nice, only thing is that I noticed you spelled "organizer" wrong.

Sorry, that's the Australian way of spelling it. I will be spelling everything the American way in the final version though.

you should also probably put "stop all sounds" for the first frame of the .fla because if I keep clicking through the bio buttons the music overlaps. Other than that.. it looks good.

Hmmm... I fixed this so it didn't overlap. Do you mean when you go to the menu Darkness still plays instead of Inside the Fire? I'll fix that but was there something else I missed?

Your part looked good so far SM.

Cheers! And thanks, Kibbl3s, for the comments.


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It's looking spectacular so far, I'm really liking that menu intro :D

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At 11/27/08 06:28 PM, ColdReaver wrote: It's looking spectacular so far, I'm really liking that menu intro :D

You mean the Newgrounds one or the actual menu? We didn't make the Newgrounds intro - that's the official intro made by the NG staff ;)


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At 11/27/08 06:35 PM, ShortMonkey wrote:
At 11/27/08 06:28 PM, ColdReaver wrote: It's looking spectacular so far, I'm really liking that menu intro :D
You mean the Newgrounds one or the actual menu? We didn't make the Newgrounds intro - that's the official intro made by the NG staff ;)

That NG intro was actually made by Will Stamper. But I really like the fact that you test everything out ShortMonkey. The more flaws we find ahead of time, the better off we will be.

Also, I hope I could finish Part 4 as soon as I can so I can take another part. Everyone's part is looking really good so far too. I think we're in excellent shape.

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*** = Done and sent

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If there are two names, it means they are competing for the part. Also, I'm gonna make this cutthroat, if you want a part that is already taken, you may compete for the part. May the best animator win.

I have given links to the parts that are finished so people know what they're competing against if they want to take somebody else's part(s).

Update:

Part 1 - PinkSkull
Part 2 -
Part 3 -
Part 4 - YoinK
Part 5 -
Part 6 - Master-Samus***
Part 7 - Djmr-_-
Part 8 - Djmr-_-/Feuse
Part 9 - Feuse
Part 10 - Feuse
Part 11 - Feuse
Part 12 - Feuse
Part 13 - PinkSkull
Part 14 - Master-Samus
Part 15 - iRicochet-_-
Part 16 - iRicochet-_-
Part 17 - ColdReaver
Part 18 -
Part 19 - Kibbl3s***
Part 20 - dirtshake***
Part 21 - ColdReaver***
Part 22 - YoinK***
Part 23 - Penboy
Part 24 - ShortMonkey
Part 25 -
Part 26 - NoperDoperTrooper***
Part 27 - Penboy
Part 28 - Master-Samus
Part 29 - Feuse/Master-Samus
Part 30 - Feuse
Part 31 -
Part 32 - TheEmoKiller-_-
Part 33 - PinkSkull
Part 34 - cHunter
Part 35 - Kibbl3s***
Part 36 -
Part 37 - ColdReaver
Part 38 - PinkSkull
Part 39 - Wasim
Part 40 - Master-Samus
Part 41 - PinkSkull
Part 42 - ShortMonkey


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At 11/27/08 06:42 PM, YoinK wrote: That NG intro was actually made by Will Stamper.

He's part of the NG staff (bloody good artist)

But I really like the fact that you test everything out ShortMonkey. The more flaws we find ahead of time, the better off we will be.

Yeah I agree. We've got the NG API system working (thanks to you) which is great. I tested out everything I could think of with the menu and Bios page. What do you think of it now?

Also, I hope I could finish Part 4 as soon as I can so I can take another part. Everyone's part is looking really good so far too. I think we're in excellent shape.

Your parts are looking great! And a few parts are excellent and a few parts are mediocre. Sometimes mediocre parts actually help the Flash because it makes the excellent parts look amazing. If the whole thing is totally awesome, none of it is... if you get what I mean. ;)


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At 11/27/08 06:50 PM, ShortMonkey wrote: Your parts are looking great! And a few parts are excellent and a few parts are mediocre. Sometimes mediocre parts actually help the Flash because it makes the excellent parts look amazing. If the whole thing is totally awesome, none of it is... if you get what I mean. ;)

I agree. The menu looks good right now.
whatever happened with this part though?
http://spamtheweb.com/ul/upload/2408/476 75_COLAB.php
I thought it was good enough.

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At 11/27/08 06:57 PM, YoinK wrote: whatever happened with this part though?

I thought it was good enough.

That was Feuse's part. He said he wanted to redo it all because he got his tablet after he had animated it. Also, Master-Samus is competing for the first part of the two.


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At 11/27/08 06:35 PM, ShortMonkey wrote:
At 11/27/08 06:28 PM, ColdReaver wrote: It's looking spectacular so far, I'm really liking that menu intro :D
You mean the Newgrounds one or the actual menu? We didn't make the Newgrounds intro - that's the official intro made by the NG staff ;)

Oh, no I meant the one that plays the "inside the fire" theme when the "guy"s face is laughing

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At 11/27/08 07:00 PM, ColdReaver wrote: Oh, no I meant the one that plays the "inside the fire" theme when the "guy"s face is laughing

Ah ok. Yeah, I made that :)

Also, just something I've brought my attention to... Feuse, you have too many parts in a row. It would make the collab seem a bit, well, disjointed if we had someone's same animation going for way longer than any others. I want you to choose part 10 or 11 and let go of it, but you can animate the rest.

That way, you can still animate what you want to achieve, but there'll be somebody else's part in between to keep it flowing like the rest of the collab. Plus, that means you don't need to animate everything and people can just assume what was happening in between.

Also, just clarifying that I'm not doing this because I doubt your Flash skills. It's simply because it'd seem disjointed :)


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Wow, I am impressed boys, you are all far better animators than what i expected. Congrats, all the parts i've seen are looking really good.
And the menu is amazing shortmonkey xD

Well, tomorrow i have my last exam, so i'll be able to finish part one between today or tomorrow, and if i get an animation rush, in a week you may have all my parts, if i dont, then it'll be more time xD (but i'll be on vacation soon, so you'll have them soon :) )

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