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Forum Topic: Flash Critique?

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Chickenfork

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Posted at: 6/24/08 01:14 AM

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I have no clue what direction I should be going in. Should some kind of plot be involved, should i just leave this for practice and start something else? Are some frames off? Before I forget here's the link.


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Eggy

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Posted at: 6/24/08 01:17 AM

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i reckon it's cool, you should go over it now and colour it in adding there full forms to the face.


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Ositoozy

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Posted at: 6/24/08 03:57 AM

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Keep working on it


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ShortMonkey

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Posted at: 6/24/08 06:40 AM

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Pretty good sketch and animation. I'd say work on the art and continue it but its really up to you.


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