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here is the link:

http://spamtheweb.com/ul/upload/230608/5 71...u2a_Scene_1.swf

Its a quick vocab matching activity that I made but I have 2 problems, one is that when the page unfurls I have a couple of the corners folding back and then coming to rest but it just doesn't look right to me, any suggestions?

Its not quite done, I may change the scroll color from that gradient gray to something more old looking but I suck with colors, also later I will add voice files and a better end scene (good job), was thinking of just having the page roll back up and maybe jumping off stage or something.

Any suggestions?

There's a problem with the link. When I click it it says 404 not found. It could be a bad link or maybe this new computer sucks,

it's a bad link. Can you upload it again somewhere?

sorry try these;

http://spamtheweb.com/ul/upload/230608/6 1534_roll_out_menu2a_Scene_1.php

Page: http://spamtheweb.com/ul/upload/230608/6 1534_roll_out_menu2a_Scene_1.php?lightbo x

File: http://spamtheweb.com/ul/upload/230608/6 1534_roll_out_menu2a_Scene_1.swf

I see what you're trying to do here.... That may be a little difficult because of the textures and colour of the paper, but you can make it more realistic by having the squiggly part at the bottom of the unrolled part. Also, animate f-b-f a little when it finishes rolling; make the edges look like they're being revealed.

Another image...

Sorry for the bad squiggly quality. I draw with a mouse.

"well first suggestion, make the link work. it will help people to help you"

First of all, to the guy above me, the first link is broken, but maybe reading the other post by him would show you that he provided working links.

And the animation looks fine. I don't know what else you could do for it...