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Forum Topic: My first Submission

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Kornswag

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Posted at: 6/7/08 02:09 AM

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Here's something I was working on to test out my new wacom tablet. I've always wanted to elaborate more on it but haven't had the time. Let me know if I've got a chance :)

My first Submission


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puredragon222

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Anatomy seems to be pretty good, and overall it's much better than anything I can do, but I really don't like that expression on her face...

It's awesome

I like Sonic in Brawl. He has pretty Final Smash.

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GoddaM

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Posted at: 6/7/08 02:57 AM

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not bad, not bad at all---excellent paint work

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Fijeta

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Posted at: 6/7/08 02:59 AM

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At 6/7/08 02:09 AM, Kornswag wrote: Here's something I was working on to test out my new wacom tablet. I've always wanted to elaborate more on it but haven't had the time. Let me know if I've got a chance :)

You've got a chance!!! :)


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BlackmarketKraig

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Posted at: 6/7/08 03:03 AM

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It's pretty nice, I really appreciate the effort you put in and I'm sure the rest of the forum does too ^_^. If you're not finished with it you might want to try to even out her eyes, they kind of bug me the way they are, but overall it's very cool. Good job.

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Nqkoi1

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Posted at: 6/7/08 07:31 AM

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Very nice but really one of her eyes seems to be falling...

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Posted at: 6/7/08 10:29 AM

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At 6/7/08 07:31 AM, Nqkoi1 wrote: Very nice but really one of her eyes seems to be falling...

That's what I was thinking.

But you should also improve on the gun. When I see something that is very straight and precise, I tend to want to see it precise and straight elsewhere. It just bugs me a bit.

But I like it, the anatomy is perfect.

Her clothes could be different, they don't really fit the environment she is posed into.

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Krayon

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Posted at: 6/7/08 10:48 AM

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Background needs a bit more work with perspective and 3D space.

Forum sig? Whats that.. 3D art thread, My art thread


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Kornswag

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Posted at: 6/8/08 04:08 PM

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Here's another sketch I threw into digital for fun.

My first Submission


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PlasticJacket

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Posted at: 6/8/08 04:33 PM

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Nice work, definatly going to check out more of your work later on!
Work more with her eyes!

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ngmastah

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Posted at: 6/8/08 04:39 PM

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Over-all the drawing is really neat, but I'd suggest some more facial features on the face, maybe some sort of expression.

PM me if you think I am good at MS paint. PMs: 5 Newest By:
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