At 6/24/11 06:45 PM, raveninskyprime wrote:
For clarification purposes this is the line art. I'm sorry if it appears to use grays but that is due to the low resolution of the image. But it is very clearly using solid black.
this is a clear proof that you're improved a lot since your first post: anatomy, composition, outline, the whole thing is highly better than some of your previous works. i'm sorry for that "realism or toon" ultimatum, i didn't explained very well. what bothers me is the fact that your coloring is a little flat and blurry and i think you should fix this by drawing with hard brushes or using solid and defined black shadea. that's all i wanted to say. i like your last pic a lot, but those shadows are inconsistent and that ruins the image, making it bland and confused. you see you can use outlined hatching for sketches, i do, but when it comes to coloring you can't, it just doesn't look right. i don't want to be annoying, i recognize your great improvement, it's just that i want to see you getting better and better and read your awesome comic at its best. hope i explained myself.