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I haven't updated my web series on this thread because I've been agonizingly trying to redesign one of the characters who will go by the code-name of 'gamma' for now.

So far, here are the results, comments?

At 8/5/08 03:04 AM, PrinceFlea wrote: Well the legs on your new revise of gamma do certainly have long legs that never seem to end.

Ooooh, ouch. Bad, Raveninsky, no cookie for you. Assuming the mutant legs are brought back into proportion, how does it look?

At 8/5/08 12:26 PM, raveninskyprime wrote:

At 8/5/08 03:04 AM, PrinceFlea wrote: Well the legs on your new revise of gamma do certainly have long legs that never seem to end.

Ooooh, ouch. Bad, Raveninsky, no cookie for you. Assuming the mutant legs are brought back into proportion, how does it look?

I think it looks feminine. If that is what you wanted, then it is good. If not, you have some work ahead of you.

Luckily, it was my intention to have it look feminin. There is a chick underneat that that thing. Anywho, here's page 16 of "The Wind Claw"

At 8/5/08 05:18 PM, raveninskyprime wrote: Luckily, it was my intention to have it look feminin. There is a chick underneat that that thing. Anywho, here's page 16 of "The Wind Claw"

Then I think you nailed it. I think this character has some real potential. I could definitely see it as part of "the gang."

Thanks much!

You should do a flash of the story arch when its completed.

At 8/6/08 05:07 PM, Neolight wrote: You should do a flash of the story arch when its completed.

That would be fun, but I'm afraid my animations would look a lot like "Broken Saints", pretty nice artwork but now animation skill what-so-ever... just a bunch of tweening...

Anywho, here's the next page:
Don't worry, this particularly heroic soldier is going to make it.

Hey, hey, post 100 of the thread and page 18 of the storyline!

So far so good, though I kinda feel you stumbled on a cliché of having a female soldier (or similiar) who doesn't get killed in a bloody way... or at all :)

Well, it's an opportunity to have fun with her later. If she survives, we get to see her fight again (which we will).

Otherwise, yeah, it's very cliche but I couldn't help myself.

Sorry, just had to do another CGI space pic:

That comic is pretty good. Why aren't the first few paged colored? It's not super original (the story line) but it is good. I will revisit later to see if there are any updates.

Thanks much. The first two pages are a result of me being lazy and experimenting with a way to produce each page more quickly. I decided to say screw it by page three. Right now it takes me about 4 hours to draw a page when I sit down to do it.

Alrighty, sorry for the delay, here's page 19:

Ah, here's page 20. Would this be considered some sort of hurdle or does that not count until I reach page 100? (Only 80 more to go then...)

At 6/5/08 02:53 AM, raveninskyprime wrote:

Somebody said I am way too much in love with a character I made...say fuck u cause thats a cool guy and a cool idea too :3

Well, when you have a crazily detailed timeline of events that happen to the guy...
Have a plotline where the poor schmuck is attacked by something that gives him powers...
Is hunted by a military organization that's so secret that the elected leaders don't know it exists...
And manages to cram in aliens...
And a love story (that sadly does not involve the guy)...

Then you got something that you like thinking about and drawing.

So here's another iteration of one of the big events and yet another drawing...

At 8/13/08 07:05 PM, raveninskyprime wrote: Ah, here's page 20. Would this be considered some sort of hurdle or does that not count until I reach page 100? (Only 80 more to go then...)

The punch in the first frame is strange. It is ... awkward. Actually your character is awkward throughout page 20. I am sure that if you look, you will understand what I mean.

At 8/13/08 07:05 PM, raveninskyprime wrote: Ah, here's page 20. Would this be considered some sort of hurdle or does that not count until I reach page 100? (Only 80 more to go then...)

"Real slaugther"? "Outside".

Booyah! That means moar GORE!!!

At 8/14/08 10:56 AM, JT1 wrote:
The punch in the first frame is strange. It is ... awkward. Actually your character is awkward throughout page 20. I am sure that if you look, you will understand what I mean.

I thought the punch was the only frame that worked, the last frame he looks like chibi-claw. That's what happens when I rush I guess. No more rushing Raven, bad!

I'm tired but I can't sleep... so here's a pic I drew:

Here's an update of that same pic... still no sleep...

Is that gamma girl? Be sure to put some fan service in XD!

At 8/15/08 03:35 PM, nikola1v wrote: Is that gamma girl? Be sure to put some fan service in XD!

Umm... We'll see about that, but no promises. The character isn't one to find herself in embarassing situations and I hate it when animes make really long scenes in showers (so no weird shower scene from me if I don't like it).

I guess the closes I'll get to fan service is how Battlestar Galactica handles their pretty ladies.

Umm... We'll see about that, but no promises. The character isn't one to find herself in embarassing situations and I hate it when animes make really long scenes in showers.

I have always wondered what kind of pervs do the scripts anyway...

so no weird shower scene from me if I don't like it)

"IF"...? Hmmmmmmm................ :P

I guess the closes I'll get to fan service is how Battlestar Galactica handles their pretty ladies.

Well, how did they? Tight uniforms?

Blarg... the start of the new semester has been crazier than expected... which is why there were no updates to my thread. However, I update with a re-imagining of the first panel in my comic. I would say it's a major improvement over that hunk of junk. Hopefully more on the series later...

Great stuff man! I have a comic character who is very similar, but only because he has a suit. Also, if you made the legs on some of your drawing anatomically correct then you drawings would be pretty much perfect!

I've been working on a couple of 3d models that were requested of me from one of my college cohorts. Here is what I've been able to make so far...

It's a raider craft, the guy wanted a fighter that would "swarm their enemy like angery hornets," and I decided to get a little literal with it, what do you think?

Here is a couple of fighters in action against a cargo ship:

Dude your stuff is AWESOME! At first i thought your 3 d images was better than your drawing, but that WindClaw serie is really great! Hope youll post more of it soon :3