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Sirtom93 intro. 2008-05-24 12:19:14 Reply

What do you think of this intro for any future flashes that I make -

http://spamtheweb.com/ul/upload/240508/6 2292_sirtom93_intro.php

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Response to Sirtom93 intro. 2008-05-24 12:47:15 Reply

http://spamtheweb.com/ul/upload/240508/6 2292_sirtom93_intro.php

Its pretty simple. The text doesn't contrast well with the background but it does with the pyramid. The pyramid could use more rotation. Overall 2.8/5 I'd say. Its good but it could use a little more.

Add some sound.

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Response to Sirtom93 intro. 2008-05-24 12:49:33 Reply

I don't like it a whole lot to be honest. The font is kind of ugly, blue letters on a black background don't work really well and the pyramid seems out of place.


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Response to Sirtom93 intro. 2008-05-24 13:01:39 Reply

It looks very tacky and the low frame rate doesn't help, try again.


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Response to Sirtom93 intro. 2008-05-24 13:50:52 Reply

At 5/24/08 12:19 PM, sirtom93 wrote: What do you think of this intro for any future flashes that I make -

http://spamtheweb.com/ul/upload/240508/6 2292_sirtom93_intro.php

I like it, but how about two fast rotations, the first one shows the text, while the 2nd one actually makes the text vanish, and when the pyramid is about to end it's 2nd rotation have it shine bright (like a small star)

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Response to Sirtom93 intro. 2008-05-24 14:06:05 Reply

The font is ugly and far too plain. Horrible colors too. And I don't really like that pyramide thingy either.

ok, I might be a lil harsh. But it's honestly not very good. Try again. :p

Doors. You'll know when they're appropriate.
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Response to Sirtom93 intro. 2008-05-24 14:20:37 Reply

Lul lul k, I was just trying out with swift.