At 1/17/09 06:05 PM, fightermarth wrote:
At 1/17/09 05:27 PM, Emanhattan wrote:
I will try and get my part done on time people, but truth is I havent touched that fla. in ages and Im too busy with school to do it properly. I dont want to ruin what I have so far by tweening everything around n stuffs.
XC
also fightermarth. you are getting better at flash but the art still looks very choppy. you should really make the design of the characters a bit more distanced from purely figures, and more like drawings in real paper.... maybe use less frames will do?
still good luck.
hey thnx!
update! you guys are probably gonna kick me out of the collab cuz the idea is kinda lame but you know.......
i was playing OoT and just thought about it.
whatever.....
here it is:
http://spamtheweb.com/ul/upload/170109/6 5077_zelda_and_link.php
http://spamtheweb.com/ul/upload/170109/6 5077_zelda_and_link.php
http://spamtheweb.com/ul/upload/170109/6 5077_zelda_and_link.php
http://spamtheweb.com/ul/upload/170109/6 5077_zelda_and_link.php
I actually very much so like it. Some gripes though: Zelda looks kind squished down. Like, compared to Link, her head is much too small... In fact, both characters just look like a bunch of shapes thrown together. It works, but it seems like, since there's not much fbf, you could spend a little more time on the characters. I know you can do it, too, 'cause Ganon looks great.
Second gripe is that Link doesn't sound very believable. Rina-Chan emotes a ton in her work, and having a fairly dead pan sounding Link when he should be exasperated and offended and just plain angry creates a terrible contrast. Also, he says "I haven't slept for days in weeks" or something along the lines of that, which doesn't make any sense. I'd be willing to voice it for you if you'd want me too, though.
That's just my take on it. I'd like to see how the end result looks.