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Cartoon-Electra
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Hows This Intro look?? 2008-05-16 15:20:05 Reply

hey, this is just a little intro to my game.

http://spamtheweb.com/ul/upload/160508/7 3110_Commentator_WSM.php

would apreciate feedback on how it looks, how it sounds and the lip syncing.

also how it could be improved.

cheers!

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Response to Hows This Intro look?? 2008-05-16 15:24:19 Reply

Her boobs are lopsided.

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Response to Hows This Intro look?? 2008-05-16 15:29:57 Reply

It's pretty good, you should center her head.

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Response to Hows This Intro look?? 2008-05-16 15:30:24 Reply
At 5/16/08 03:24 PM, mechanixnut wrote: Her boobs are lopsided.

lol shes just on a funny angle...yeah i sopose they look abit funny thanks..

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Response to Hows This Intro look?? 2008-05-16 15:31:28 Reply

Very static. Only the mouth is moving, makes it very uninteresting. Try add more stuff, maybe arm movements or atleast blinking eyes.

The sound and lipsyncing is good though.

also, the boobs are weird.

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