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SolidShrimp
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A Drawing... or Menu 2008-05-09 18:43:14 Reply

This will be the menu of my newest flash. I feel like it is too cluttered, what do you think? Is it good? What needs improvement? Should I use shading instead of gradients? ect...

A Drawing... or Menu

"When we are dying, all we can think of is being alive. When we are living, all we can think of is our death."

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Response to A Drawing... or Menu 2008-05-09 18:51:18 Reply

I really hate the text on the top right. It's ugly and hard to read.

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Response to A Drawing... or Menu 2008-05-09 18:53:06 Reply

yeah... uploading it kind of messed it up. usually you can read it but i think im going to remove it.

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Response to A Drawing... or Menu 2008-05-09 19:55:24 Reply

move the buttons closer together. I really hate seeing things spaced out too evenly.

the gradients look fine, you've done a pretty good job using them.

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Response to A Drawing... or Menu 2008-05-10 09:13:49 Reply

Everythings is nice, only that red text. !

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Response to A Drawing... or Menu 2008-05-10 13:49:32 Reply

i'd delete the black lines and drew the shades by my own. the details in the gasmask realy impressed me, good work!

i'm working on mah very, very big project.

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Response to A Drawing... or Menu 2008-05-10 14:19:08 Reply

thanks guys. Yeah, that circle tip really helped me out. i'm going to go back and redraw some of the stuff.

"When we are dying, all we can think of is being alive. When we are living, all we can think of is our death."

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