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Storyline Art-Work 2008-04-26 22:50:04 Reply

I've been working on my Storyline for a while now. I might not be able to get flash for around 2 years, but I plan to keep working on mine. Till then I'd just like to ask your opinions on artwork that I've been doing for it.

What do you think?
(I'll try uploading.)

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Response to Storyline Art-Work 2008-04-26 22:56:20 Reply

That's not how storyboarding is done. Story boards are sketched panels.

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Response to Storyline Art-Work 2008-04-26 23:06:24 Reply

At 4/26/08 10:56 PM, hippl5 wrote: That's not how storyboarding is done. Story boards are sketched panels.

storyLINE, as the title says.

it's almost synonymous with plot, but in the artistic sense... it works. its the flow that the story will take.

but, what is it?

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Response to Storyline Art-Work 2008-04-27 19:55:53 Reply

A Chain Chomp chasing the Main character in Forever Forest. I have the full story of how he got there on my blog but its a bit long.

I don't have much to work with right now so I'm limited on how well my art looks. This is my best with a mouse...so far...

If I can get the right camera I show hand-draw art-work, and they are much better.

I've got another Mouse drawn item here, do have anything mouse drawn?

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Response to Storyline Art-Work 2008-06-11 22:04:00 Reply

Why not continue?

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Response to Storyline Art-Work 2008-06-11 22:06:41 Reply

This will be from a future battle. Shadow Queen vs. Baba Pirrahna. (I explain characters in my profile.)

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Response to Storyline Art-Work 2008-06-11 22:10:02 Reply

Many battles will be fought, some with the ninja sense (writing wise), this is an impluse from kowing that.

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Response to Storyline Art-Work 2008-06-11 22:14:14 Reply

I've done 3-D art though I don't have the best programs yet.
This Cannon is a taste of Chomp's (a chain chomp with arms and legs, without the chains). He is part Bullet Bill.

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Response to Storyline Art-Work 2008-06-12 01:58:10 Reply

It looks like fanart of the mario brothers. Except Peach looks like a man and the main character looks like a midget monk.

The drawings themselves are mediocre and the coloring is the only thing that makes them look neat. And it looks like you're limited on your drawing methods because the chomp in the first picture and the baba piranha seem to be in the same angle and position.

How about take it easy? You're trying too hard.

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Response to Storyline Art-Work 2008-06-12 11:08:29 Reply

Your probably right, but I'll keep going. I'm not about to back out of artwork yet. I've made to much improvement from my past drawings.


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Response to Storyline Art-Work 2008-06-12 12:05:18 Reply

the BBS isnt for art! its for chuck norris jokes! such as

jesus can walk on water, but chuck norris can swim through land.


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Response to Storyline Art-Work 2008-06-28 16:56:33 Reply

I said I would keep going.

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Response to Storyline Art-Work 2008-06-28 17:01:13 Reply

At 4/26/08 10:50 PM, Allikiza wrote: I've been working on my Storyline for a while now. I might not be able to get flash for around 2 years, but I plan to keep working on mine. Till then I'd just like to ask your opinions on artwork that I've been doing for it.

What do you think?
(I'll try uploading.)

What do you mean, you won't be able to get Flash for another 2 years? Although the full version is $700, the educational version is only $250, and all you have to do to get that discount is prove that you are indeed a student. Your artwork is mediocre, but I suppose that's because you've been using a mouse. How about just scanning hand-drawn stuff in? Or invest in a good graphics tablet. The Wacom Bamboo is good, at $75 for the 4x6 version, and $200 for the 8x6.


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Response to Storyline Art-Work 2008-06-28 17:57:26 Reply

What do you mean, you won't be able to get Flash for another 2 years? Although the full version is $700, the educational version is only $250, and all you have to do to get that discount is prove that you are indeed a student. Your artwork is mediocre, but I suppose that's because you've been using a mouse. How about just scanning hand-drawn stuff in? Or invest in a good graphics tablet. The Wacom Bamboo is good, at $75 for the 4x6 version, and $200 for the 8x6.

Yeah... but I can't fit 250 $ with my current buget... or 100$ for that matter... I'll look into that art tablet. (Thanks for the view)

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