At 6/6/08 08:38 PM, TITROTU wrote:
put the final touches on the menu and pre-loader.
He said pre-loader... <3
Oh, sorry. Yeah, I need to work on that. But if anyone could give some comment on what to add/remove, it would help a lot!
Also, if anyone has a Mac, can they check if the preloader works properly? I have a bad feeling that it won't... In which case I'll have to fix that.
Oh, and I'm working on some small parts. Nothing special, but I thought I'd try my hand.
And I'm also happy to help with any coding.
At 6/7/08 11:44 AM, EvilEgg wrote:
So how can I make it more short and simple?
I would suggest...
Keeping the beginning with Mario and the mushroom.
Then having the V8 bottle hit him (like you did, but it may be a little unclear for some that it's a bottle...)
Then, having the "could've had a V8!" line (the sound clip needs improving, too much has been cut on each side of the clip.)
While that is happening, maybe you could have the V8 bottle come up to the front of the screen, prominent and "in-your-face" (just to add to the effect ;-) )
I think anything after this is just overkill...
And keep in mind that people from the UK (like me), and other places do not know V8 very well (we don't have the commercials or anything.) So don't expect everyone to get it completely!
Sorry if I sound too bossy, controlling or anything, I just want the clip to do well, since it does have some good potential! (Besides, Paper-Shadow gets the criticism MUCH worse!)