What do you think?

[dodo-man-1]

What do you people think of this? It's a song I'm working on about the average Newgrounds user called "Newgrounder", to the tune of Jonathan Coulton's "Code Monkey", a video of which can be found here.

Lyrics so far (I need more verses)

Newgrounder turn on computer
Newgrounder log on
Newgrounder read latest news post
By admin JohnnyUtah
Admin say Metal Gear Solid collab
Is coming quick
So hurry, send in Flash submissions
Newgrounder quick think
Newgrounder buy Flash for 200 dollars and
Then he try, but use like crap
Newgrounder pay no mind to it
Newgrounder play Alien Hominid
Newgrounder like Pico
Newgrounder like Wade and Stamper too
Newgrounder very simple man
Who hate '07 user teens
Newgrounder hate you

[Purpin]

I think you should revise the grammar in it.

[Dei-Sama]

The word order of it is odd.

[DrClay]

I is confused D:

[Rooster]

Honestly, I thought it sucked.
Sorry.

[DP]

At 4/9/08 07:51 PM, Purpin wrote: I think you should revise the grammar in it.

And make it rhyme a little better.

[adrian2695]

At 4/9/08 07:52 PM, physco-pickle wrote: Honestly, I thought it sucked.
Sorry.

lol way to be blunt about it.

[sldghmmr]

I think you should stick to NO word songs because those lyrics are terrible

[RobRob15]

Give up now!!