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At 4/27/08 02:42 AM, The-Scourge wrote: Not sure how many times this has been said but you really need to work on your anatomy, and being thirteen is no excuse for the art you produce, i know people at thirteen who do amazing stuff, its called practice.
I have checked through the thread though and I think your improving, but even in cartooning you need to get your proportions right, and listen to the crazy person, you need more syemtry, i recommend you get a sketchpad and go to some place with alot of shapes and variation (like a mall) and go draw whatever you see and focus less on each individual detail and more on your quality as a whole.
Good luck, ill check up on this more

i see where your coming from but all the art in this is not new im sorry but only some of it is lol...and yeah the carttoon guy wen he gets up does not look right. and my sym im going to have my dad give me some lessons cuz he is realy good!

YAY for improvement!!! (im pretty hyper after all that happened last night lol) you have been improving though :)

At 4/27/08 12:15 PM, crazyperson3 wrote: YAY for improvement!!! (im pretty hyper after all that happened last night lol) you have been improving though :)

lol im mopy atm =/ i axe-i-dintly 8 a meet pocket not a chees and im a veg-i-tary-an...i need to spell thoughs right.

Do you have flash, king? If you do I think you should start practicing in it because it's a huge step up in animation (versus pivots) and the practice you gain (especially from fbf) in redrawing a character will increase your drawing skills wonderfully. It has done great things for all my drawing perspectives

At 4/27/08 04:05 PM, The-Scourge wrote: Do you have flash, king? If you do I think you should start practicing in it because it's a huge step up in animation (versus pivots) and the practice you gain (especially from fbf) in redrawing a character will increase your drawing skills wonderfully. It has done great things for all my drawing perspectives

oh you coment here lol no i just pmed you say do you no of any fre trials lol um how much is it?

There is a 30 day trial somewhere at adobe. But you can also obtain it fairly cheaply at ebay (i got mine for $380) there are ways to obtain it for free but you do so at your own risk

Ahem, ah, hi there. That period doesn't lead anywhere, yep, in fact you never saw this post! Ahem, yeah.

At 4/27/08 03:51 PM, king7272777 wrote:

At 4/27/08 12:15 PM, crazyperson3 wrote: YAY for improvement!!! (im pretty hyper after all that happened last night lol) you have been improving though :)

lol im mopy atm =/ i axe-i-dintly 8 a meet pocket not a chees and im a veg-i-tary-an...i need to spell thoughs right.

oooooh thats gotta hurt...i have lots of vegetarian friends...anyways they're right about flash being good practice :)

oooooh thats gotta hurt...i have lots of vegetarian friends...anyways they're right about flash being good practice :)

yeah im not happy about it but what cani do.
i wish i could get rid of that post by that guy and his damn porn link and pube sig... i hate people like that cuz my mom gose throught this some times...

that wasn't a porn link...it was a link to a download of CS3

you look like a girl

You're good, but work on your hands :P especially when they're holding stuff..

like characters hands not ur own :P

At 4/28/08 05:11 PM, crazyperson3 wrote: that wasn't a porn link...it was a link to a download of CS3

you sure..lol i just click saw boobs and closed window...lol i dont wanna get in truble by me dad...

At 4/28/08 09:19 PM, As-Soul wrote: you look like a girl

you look like a meanie!!! ...-_-

At 4/29/08 06:42 PM, king7272777 wrote:

At 4/28/08 05:11 PM, crazyperson3 wrote: that wasn't a porn link...it was a link to a download of CS3

you sure..lol i just click saw boobs and closed window...lol i dont wanna get in truble by me dad...

maybe it was an ad you saw. lol this makes me wonder what my parents would think about me practicing anatomy XP

yeah i no i think ill can i few things in al lil
my hand need work but im working on shading atm.

you sure..lol i just click saw boobs and closed window...lol i dont wanna get in truble by me dad...

maybe it was an ad you saw. lol this makes me wonder what my parents would think about me practicing anatomy XP

lol must have ben well still that guy was bad news i can telll...

oh well. you need to post a new picture for me to criticize :P

At 4/29/08 07:33 PM, crazyperson3 wrote: oh well. you need to post a new picture for me to criticize :P

okay since you are a critic,

At 4/29/08 09:57 PM, king7272777 wrote:

At 4/29/08 07:33 PM, crazyperson3 wrote: oh well. you need to post a new picture for me to criticize :P

okay since you are a critic,

the shoes don't look right to me

okay since you are a critic,

The skulls one is ok, however the guy above me, is very unproportioned and the legs arent long enough and the pockets are too low. I want you to stand up straight, go in front of a fullbody mirror, put on a pair of pants with pockets and pose like the character you drew. Then tell me the differences you see.

At 4/29/08 11:12 PM, The-Scourge wrote: The skulls one is ok, however the guy above me, is very unproportioned and the legs arent long enough and the pockets are too low. I want you to stand up straight, go in front of a fullbody mirror, put on a pair of pants with pockets and pose like the character you drew. Then tell me the differences you see.

i have sorts on but ill do it and the guys pockets are where i wunt them but thx for being a critic =] i need it!

the arm is to for from the body
the sleevs are to flat on the body
the first foot is at the wrong angle
and the hed is not turnd wight.
any more?

heres my new pik =] this guy does not look right on purpos but if he was not like that on purpos he would be bad qually!

i hypercamed it so if you wanna see me draw it just tell me =]

the shoes don't look right to me

i no i suck at drawing shoes XD

hay you should go se my youtube layout its one big pice of art,
its a gif so it looks dif than i wanted.

http://www.youtube.com/user/king7272777

heres my other eye guy =]
oh and im going out of town for a week can you keep my thread liven?
like coment once a day plz

At 4/30/08 11:16 AM, king7272777 wrote: heres my other eye guy =]
oh and im going out of town for a week can you keep my thread liven?
like coment once a day plz

on both 'eye guys' the left side is messed up.

I know hes cartoon but make the iris a bit nicer please, at the very least make it a proper circle

At 4/30/08 05:09 PM, crazyperson3 wrote:

At 4/30/08 11:16 AM, king7272777 wrote: heres my other eye guy =]
oh and im going out of town for a week can you keep my thread liven?
like coment once a day plz

on both 'eye guys' the left side is messed up.

i know his orms are to skiny.

At 4/30/08 08:06 PM, The-Scourge wrote: I know hes cartoon but make the iris a bit nicer please, at the very least make it a proper circle

im not sure what iris like by the puple?