Enviorment friendly Hotel

[Flying-dutchman]

Hej everyone,

I made this poster with flash 8 for a school project, I had to do a presentation about the way a hotel can improve it's share helping the envoirment.

Let me know what u think

[Catpixels]

In real life that wouldn't work

Art wise it's a bit poor
Many of the elements aren't well mixed (like having the windows and the butterflies with a black outline, while the tree has a brown and green one) and you use effects that don't blend well (soft shading on the light versus the cell shading on the trees)
The idea I get it's that you simply grabbed images from different sources and pasted them, without making the effort to make the overall image look consistent =(

[Bl00dRedKnife]

At 4/6/08 11:49 AM, Catpixels wrote: bla bla bla

well, sorry, if everyone's art cant be as perfect as you think they should, jeez

the picture is pretty good, btw, i sure would like to live in one of those someday

[High-off-cheese]

Thats not environmentally friendly, you killed a tree!! :(

[Catpixels]

Don't ask for a comment if you can't take constructive criticism D<

It's exactly because it isn't perfect that why I pointed out what I thought it should be improved in order to become even better. But if you don't want help, fine, you won't hear another word from me

[UMREE]

At 4/6/08 03:27 PM, Catpixels wrote: Don't ask for a comment if you can't take constructive criticism D<

It's exactly because it isn't perfect that why I pointed out what I thought it should be improved in order to become even better. But if you don't want help, fine, you won't hear another word from me

panties in a bunch

[test-object]

At 4/6/08 03:27 PM, Catpixels wrote: Don't ask for a comment if you can't take constructive criticism D<

It's exactly because it isn't perfect that why I pointed out what I thought it should be improved in order to become even better. But if you don't want help, fine, you won't hear another word from me

Wrong person, I'm afraid. Bl00d, don't interfere with people who give good advice.

[fofizzle]

I bet it's owned by Al Gore and he's all like "This room is top secret but somehow i got this video camera that I'm not even attempting to hide into it".
Anywho, if it is owned by Al Gore, I'll have to bomb that tree.

[Diphallia]

At 4/6/08 12:15 PM, High-off-cheese wrote: Thats not environmentally friendly, you killed a tree!! :(

He killed the largest tree in the world.

[TurkeyOnAStick]

If that's the image for your presentation, then it gets the point across that you're tieing hotels with the environment. The hill line's nice. The placid square windows make the hotel look more of a picture of the typical houses 5 year olds draw, tho, and the beams of light breaking through the leaves are probably better off not being there, sorry.

I made this poster with flash 8 for a school project, I had to do a presentation about the way a hotel can improve it's share helping the envoirment.

This caught my eye. What subject is this btw? I wouldn't think hotels were that critical to the environment, and any helpful contributions could be done at a household scale anyway, such as mass recycling and heat conservation.