Anime drawing-feedback please

[Warking5000]

This is a drawing I did in about an hour so could I get a bit of POSOTIVE FEEDBACK none of this awwww it's kinda crap i'm here to get better and it would help if you said the bad things in nice ways instead on trying to demoralise me and yes I know the eyes are slightly wider than a usual persons face I get that nobodys perfect.

P.S sure you can throw in the odd bad comment but you really shouldn't try to take me down thanks.

[darth13]

You've got most of the basics right except that the face is to long.
Here are some guidelines:
http://www.cablenet.ne.jp/~japanime/howt o/tutorial/head4a.gif
http://www.kabukiyasha.net/images/tutori als/drawing_basics_face10.jpg

(only the proportions, hope it helps)

[Warking5000]

Thanks mate i'll check up on those as it will probs take awhile and it's a fairwhile into the night over here in AUS

[sherru]

its good if its your first, keep it up, but hows this

[High-off-cheese]

At 4/6/08 06:48 AM, Warking5000 wrote: This is a drawing I did in about an hour so could I get a bit of POSOTIVE FEEDBACK none of this awwww it's kinda crap i'm here to get better and it would help if you said the bad things in nice ways instead on trying to demoralise me and yes I know the eyes are slightly wider than a usual persons face I get that nobodys perfect.

P.S sure you can throw in the odd bad comment but you really shouldn't try to take me down thanks.

Its not bad for a start, but I would fix the eyes because it looks like he is looking to 2 different directions.

[crazyperson3]

good start, but the head shape isn't quite right and his left eye is not symmetrical

[Maxxor]

At 4/6/08 06:50 AM, darth13 wrote: Here are some guidelines:
http://www.cablenet.ne.jp/~japanime/howt o/tutorial/head4a.gif
http://www.kabukiyasha.net/images/tutori als/drawing_basics_face10.jpg

A tutorial explaining how to draw heads incorrectly, how wonderful.

[Vousielle]

The proportions are off, but the best advice I can give is to learn how to draw realistic faces first, which will help your later anime drawings.

[wasb]

At 4/6/08 06:50 AM, darth13 wrote: You've got most of the basics right except that the face is to long.
Here are some guidelines:
http://www.cablenet.ne.jp/~japanime/howt o/tutorial/head4a.gif
http://www.kabukiyasha.net/images/tutori als/drawing_basics_face10.jpg

(only the proportions, hope it helps)

That is not how you draw heads...

I suggest looking in the mirror with a sketchbook and then draw your face unless your face has oversized eyes, a nose that could poke someones eye out, a line for a mouth and a chin that is shaped like a triangle everything should be in proper proportions...

[SuperSode]

At 4/6/08 01:46 PM, Vousielle wrote: The proportions are off, but the best advice I can give is to learn how to draw realistic faces first, which will help your later anime drawings.

I love you (no homo)

but seriously, MY tip to EVERYONE is to LISTEN to those who say "draw realism foo"
cuz you won't need any tutorials, and it works better than most tutorials actually DO.

Study, don't copy

peace

[Vousielle]

At 4/6/08 02:05 PM, SuperSode wrote: I love you (no homo)

but seriously, MY tip to EVERYONE is to LISTEN to those who say "draw realism foo"
cuz you won't need any tutorials, and it works better than most tutorials actually DO.

Study, don't copy

peace

I love you back (homo)

[darkwraith123]

not bad the face is alittle long but the hair is good and the eyey were all right you just got to work on proportioning keep trying though

[lamer17]

Uhm i dont think its like 1 hour of work pretty basic..

[UMREE]

pretty mediocre, but at least ur getting ur basics right unlike the last time. i see that ur able to create the idea of noses, eyes, and mouths now so thats good. i suggest u practice more though u still have a long way to go.

[IcyPop23]

Only difference I see is that the lines are cleaner.

The face is still too long, not really a fan of the style of the nose and the mouth is too big.