The Enchanted Cave 2
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Lookin' nice.
Maybe make the outline of the skull just a little bit darker?
At 4/5/08 07:33 PM, Maxxor wrote: Lookin' nice.
Maybe make the outline of the skull just a little bit darker?
Good idea. I'll get on that.
looks pretty sweet man, i would add a dark background.
pretty snazz-tastic sticker. If I had a sticker that great I would keep it on my forehead :P
At 4/5/08 08:06 PM, MrMacro wrote: pretty snazz-tastic sticker. If I had a sticker that great I would keep it on my forehead :P
i would put it on my cheek...stickers look cute there XP (yes i used the word cute, what are you gonna do about it! im a girl though so its ok :P)
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It's a nice initial design, I have a few suggestions though. First, lose the gradients, they make it look a little shoddy, secondly, smoothen up your lines. It's a sleek design, not too complimented by slightly bumpy outlines.
And maybe make the pink colour a little less bright, only a little, it's a tad overwhelming at the moment.
But I really like the image =) good job.
ks good but yeh around the skull you need the lines a bit darker...
At 4/6/08 04:22 AM, Trinidex wrote: It's a nice initial design, I have a few suggestions though. First, lose the gradients, they make it look a little shoddy, secondly, smoothen up your lines. It's a sleek design, not too complimented by slightly bumpy outlines.
And maybe make the pink colour a little less bright, only a little, it's a tad overwhelming at the moment.
But I really like the image =) good job.
This is made in Photoshop, so smoothing out the lines is kinda hard to do. Also, those aren't gradients, I shaded it with a light brush.
I think you should do this again with Flash, smooth out the lines and change the pink a little, what Trinidex said. It shouldn't take long by tracing.
Anyway, killer design!
Update. I'm keeping the rough lines. I like 'em.
At 4/6/08 09:05 AM, SpencerMann wrote: Update. I'm keeping the rough lines. I like 'em.
You should they give it a good look. With the texture you added it looks much better then before.
I like your art style, do you have your own thread?
saw your stuff on the Tag Da Bus thread, wouldn't mind seeing another character from you
At 4/5/08 07:48 PM, UMREE wrote: looks pretty sweet man, i would add a dark background.
why would you want a background on a sticker, it looks fine this way.
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From what I understand, hot colors pop out while cool colors recede. Having the mask be very light against a hot color body causes the head to lose all of its emphasis, although should look like it's closer to the viewer and draw more attention than the body.
At 4/6/08 09:05 AM, SpencerMann wrote: Update. I'm keeping the rough lines. I like 'em.
The version with the red was better. It made the head stand out and the colors more appealing.
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At 4/6/08 09:54 PM, The-Swain wrote: From what I understand, hot colors pop out while cool colors recede. Having the mask be very light against a hot color body causes the head to lose all of its emphasis, although should look like it's closer to the viewer and draw more attention than the body.
agreed, the head is definitely the best part of the drawing (in my opinion) so I recommend either changing the color, or de-saturate the rest of the body.