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At 3/22/08 02:14 PM, FingerFactor wrote: ok, so heres my very early rouph. About a hours work so far. I may end up finding a way to hide the legs, its not exactly my best area as you can tell. haha. Im open to suggestions :P

I don't think you reimagined dad.

you just gave him some clothes.

like some other entries in this contest it isn't radical enough.

started on the rendering and recreating of characters...its not TOO original...but i wanted them to keep their individual original forms more or less....

Evrey pictures rocks so rock on dudes

ShirtTurtles' is aweesome.

*throws the bone to the public*

help me get better,

im planning to make a set of wind waker-esque characters

ways to improve pico?

1. lots o hair
2. the original
3. cooler original

At 3/23/08 09:37 AM, JOHNNYVANITY wrote: *throws the bone to the public*

I like #1 the best, you've got an odd style I like it.

I can't tell you how to improve in a style I don't use or see often, I can't just throw out the tried and true "improve your anatomy" because yo aren't going for realistic proportions. I guess all you could do is add more details, a bg, more characters, before you submit the finalized version.

;/

Any feedback on this?

Heres a littel tankmen u guys but im stell learning to draw the arms and elgs they arent good l know im just good at drawing faces and bodys but legs and arms l suck at them
L dont know l may create more of this

And im working on this too kind of sucks but its something u know and it aint stell made

At 3/23/08 12:11 PM, q13qew wrote: And im working on this too kind of sucks but its something u know and it aint stell made

Heres it whit no paint white paint and evreone awesome draws u guys made

At 3/23/08 11:32 AM, Xmanne wrote: Any feedback on this?

Could be a little "neater".

I'm making another cause I didn't really like my other one. Here's my first sketch.Pico Sketch
Feedback?

Opps, to small. Sorry peoples, heres another
Pico Sketch

I'm done. FEEDBACK?!
Pico Grenade
And I can't post a picture cause it always says my files to big.

At 3/23/08 11:32 AM, Xmanne wrote: Any feedback on this?

I couldn't tell if that was tankmen or pico for a second. Make it resemble the original a little more.

FEEDBACK?! Anything wrong? Stuff I could in prove? Come on!

some preliminary sketches/scans of what i plan on doin. feedback is always awesome and welcome!

...nene

.....aaaaaand pico (not the best scan i know, did the other two in ink after some fooling around)

@ FugMonkey, I'm really digging the style.

Comments or criticism on this?

We're adding an extra prize pack.

When the contest is over we will pick the best of each franchise, in other words the best pico redesign, the best bots redesign, the best tankmen redesign, and the best dad n' me. It seemed like the most logical thing to do.

At 3/23/08 10:44 AM, 50vmp wrote: I like #1 the best, you've got an odd style I like it.

;/

Cheers for that dude.

Always good to know the work is noticed on here

I'm working on the nene right now

I finished another one, lol. Probaly my best yet.
Dad 'n Me Wimp

At 3/23/08 03:22 PM, Ajator wrote: FEEDBACK?! Anything wrong? Stuff I could in prove? Come on!

Dude... Calm down. Many things.

You posted 3 posts in a row. From sketch to completion in a single hour. You waited an hour after your finish post to CAPS EXCLAMATION POINTS! demand feedback. Be patient. Ask nicely and politely for feedback.

The time you spent on it... I'm trying not to be judgemental, but... ok. To me, it looked like you didn't put much effort into this, which makes me want to return the favor and not put any effort into critiquing. I'm not saying that you didn't put any effort into it. I'm saying it 'seems that way' to me. And the hour you spent from sketch to finish kinda re-enforces that assumption.

Educate yourself. Learn how to use the program you have to compress your picture to the proper size. I can't believe that pic takes over 150k. Look at some of the other pics here. If they can squeeze that level of detail into 150k... c'mon. There have got to be compression programs you can download if the one you're using doesn't.

And again your link went to the pic below. How the fuck is anyone supposed to critique that? It's god damn tiny. That link has got to be wrong.

Seriously kid most of us here want to help. When people behave like you have done it makes it hard.

This may seem harsh arrogant and hypocritical, but I AM RESPONDING. And it's so that you can get what you want. Should you choose to listen to me.

ever think nene was such a fucking suicidal emo just because she wasn't a sexy man?

WELL SO DID I.

This is gonna take way too long.

Here's my latest idea for an A-bot redesign.

At 3/23/08 11:15 PM, Occluded wrote: This is gonna take way too long.

Here's my latest idea for an A-bot redesign.

in honor of robot chicken "Can you fuck it!?"

in a related note, its a great idea and it looks great

At 3/23/08 09:37 PM, JOHNNYVANITY wrote: ever think nene was such a fucking suicidal emo just because she wasn't a sexy man?

WELL SO DID I.

wait is that nene or luis?

At 3/24/08 01:34 AM, Coaly wrote:

At 3/23/08 09:37 PM, JOHNNYVANITY wrote: ever think nene was such a fucking suicidal emo just because she wasn't a sexy man?

WELL SO DID I.

wait is that nene or luis?

I must have been subconsciously probing at luis' fondness of womens clothes. whatever.