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Clitorotti
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New characters 2008-03-01 16:21:49 Reply

So I'm developing a couple main characters for my new flash movie called "Commies" and I'm not so sold on these guys yet. They look pretty damn similair which I definetly have to sort out. Any ideas or comments would be appreciated.

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Response to New characters 2008-03-01 16:27:42 Reply

I think the line thickness needs to be consistent.

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DooDooMeaT
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Response to New characters 2008-03-01 16:39:35 Reply

It looks good...Don't listen to that other guy...you want variation in your lines...

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Response to New characters 2008-03-01 16:46:17 Reply

they look all the same except for the one on the far left, he has a different helmet but still looks way to much like the other characters.

Work on making them vary in features a bit more.

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Response to New characters 2008-03-01 16:49:15 Reply

you might want to make their legs longer they look out of proportion.

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Response to New characters 2008-03-01 17:12:59 Reply

They look nice, except i think that they would look better with boots, or pants of some kind.

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Response to New characters 2008-03-01 17:17:50 Reply

Give the one of the two on the right some different features, maybe add a ciggy in his mouth or something, ;p

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Response to New characters 2008-03-01 17:52:47 Reply

Poor guys, they have no arms!

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Response to New characters 2008-03-01 20:13:49 Reply
At 3/1/08 04:39 PM, DooDooMeaT wrote: It looks good...Don't listen to that other guy...you want variation in your lines...

variation is fine, but this is kind of over done.

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Response to New characters 2008-03-01 22:55:19 Reply
At 3/1/08 05:52 PM, Biznasco wrote: Poor guys, they have no arms!

Madness guys neither. And BTW, i do like'm, and their perfect :B

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Response to New characters 2008-03-02 02:19:41 Reply

I think it's a perfect, comicish style. Nice work.

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