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My eyes.. 2008-02-20 13:32:43 Reply

I drew these eyes and wanted to know what you thought of em?

Thanks.

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Response to My eyes.. 2008-02-20 13:40:57 Reply

Very good and even simply, try make them bigger and add some effects.

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Response to My eyes.. 2008-02-20 13:45:57 Reply

At 2/20/08 01:40 PM, K0peryto wrote: Very good and even simply, try make them bigger and add some effects.

Ok thanks, I only made em small because I was doing em for a face, but got slightly pleased with them so decided to post em here =] Yeah i'll try add some effetcs.. You mean like blinking?

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Response to My eyes.. 2008-02-20 13:54:58 Reply

looks awfully simple.

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Response to My eyes.. 2008-02-20 14:11:11 Reply

At 2/20/08 01:54 PM, DarkSytze wrote: looks awfully simple.

umm.. Not really.. Thanks for your helpful comment..

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Response to My eyes.. 2008-02-20 14:20:06 Reply

They're not exactly bad, but they don't deserve their own thread. This whole thing is just pointless.


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Response to My eyes.. 2008-02-20 14:32:57 Reply

At 2/20/08 02:11 PM, ChazzGoth wrote:
At 2/20/08 01:54 PM, DarkSytze wrote: looks awfully simple.
umm.. Not really.. Thanks for your helpful comment..

what kind of constructive criticism should i give it? i'd say give it alot of more details, since of right now, it's four narrow lines with three circles in it, with colouring and impossible shading. eyes have far more detail, but you already canceled out ''simple looking.'' by saying ''Not really..''

like mushroomboy5 already said, it's not worthy of it's own thread, it's not detailed enough (it's a small image, some suggestions would be making it bigger in size, add eyebrows, wrinkles etc.)
and it's mediocre at best. sorry, but the picture would fit better in that ''post your eye topic.'' since it's not astounding interesting or good to look at.

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Response to My eyes.. 2008-02-20 14:43:47 Reply

Pretty good! I see that you and I share similar techniques when drawing eyes....
These are very nice, simplistic eyes. I don't really see any major problems with them.

If (and that is just an if...) you wanted to go for more detail, you should add the little pink bits in the corners of the eyes, where the tear ducts are located. Also, some eyelashes wouldn't go amiss.

But anyway, they're pretty good. Thumbs up!
Now draw the rest of the face! :P


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Oh, and check out my artwork: http://www.newgrounds.com/bbs/topic /802110

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Response to My eyes.. 2008-02-21 00:37:24 Reply

There's already an Eye Topic..

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Response to My eyes.. 2008-02-21 00:43:11 Reply

very simply done try adding a line on the bottom from the cheekbones, eyebrows, eyelashes, and a line on top of the eye if u really want to get into it

also soft lines inside the blue part of the eyes (sorry i momentarily forgot what thats called lol)

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Response to My eyes.. 2008-02-21 02:49:48 Reply

Good, but looks kind of awkward. It kind of feels to me that they're looking up, seeing as it's very round on top and flatter on the bottom.


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Response to My eyes.. 2008-02-21 11:00:06 Reply

very nice i woutd love to see the face that you were drawing you should post it


come on every bodys doing it even turtles

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Response to My eyes.. 2008-02-21 12:04:23 Reply

At 2/20/08 01:32 PM, ChazzGoth wrote: I drew these eyes and wanted to know what you thought of em?

Thanks.

ummm ....


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