My Shirt (work in progress)

[IcePyro]

Please Check it out.

dont forget, its still a work in progress :P

any comments or suggestions?

[darksytze]

looks like a clad of doodles honestly, i personally wouldn't buy it because it just looks like a bunch of drawings printed onto a shirt.

[IcePyro]

At 2/9/08 08:18 AM, DarkSytze wrote: looks like a clad of doodles honestly, i personally wouldn't buy it because it just looks like a bunch of drawings printed onto a shirt.

thats mostly what i was going for.

[MrMacro]

you might wanna try and stick to one main theme EG pirate ballons paint or crayons

[Lopas1]

If you just had the skull that would be cool, but with all it looks.. meh.. not that good..

[JesterCo]

what is everybody complaining about
id buy it if it were sold at wal mart or sears or shit
but if i had to buy it online
i wouldnt
its very nice and the drawings go well on the brown material
9/10

[Maxxor]

Too sketchy and messy. Clean it up and it might turn out quite decent.

[Cyberdevil]

Looks pretty cool! Doesn't really have any concept or meaning to it though, and personally, I'd only ear a T-Shirt that is either brandless or that displays my own emotions/views/etc. It's a great design though.

[kernalphage]

personally, i think it'd look good with an in-between color as a slow outline, kind of like a thick background.

also, the godzilla monster thing's placement makes it look a bit too "four corner" for a random design, drag it in with the other stuff!!

otherwise, it's nice and random. i'd buy it!

[MrMacro]

if you made it flow together better i would buy it too. but right now i think it's kind of like three shirt designs on one t-shirt

[Captain]

pretty cool design, id drop the dinosaur in the corner, i'd leave it that fluid mess of doodles that goes from the bottom up to the right shoulder.

but really cool, are you going to silk screen it or paint it on?