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At 2/25/08 08:37 PM, DooDooMeaT wrote:

At 2/25/08 08:01 PM, THINKBOX wrote: update on my progress any comments/crits are welcome

I Like the hair and the other stuff is coming along nicely but...

lol lol lol lol lol i laughed so hard when i saw that just some transparent layers i havent finished the vag yet

At 2/25/08 11:22 PM, THINKBOX wrote:

At 2/25/08 08:37 PM, DooDooMeaT wrote:

At 2/25/08 08:01 PM, THINKBOX wrote: update on my progress any comments/crits are welcome

I Like the hair and the other stuff is coming along nicely but...

lol lol lol lol lol i laughed so hard when i saw that just some transparent layers i havent finished the vag yet

the stomach mucles on both are still very akward, you should try and reference those, or dont add them if they arent on photo you are drawing over.

really i liked my abs ill take annother look at them thanx

ya ThinkBox, I agree with MindChamber, I don't buy the abs. Maybe if you smoothed the shading out a bit. Or even you could try addressing the plain area around the abs as well, that may help.

On a positive note, I think her gun will be bad ass when its complete

abs to close together to defined not proportioned correctly ? what ya guy think? or is this better?

So I finally got a day off from work and was able to really sit down to work on this thing. The progress you see is the result of about 7 hours of work.

Got rid of the guns as I realize in the 80's artists were drawing guns of a size that just seems tiny by todays standards of fantasy. Been kicking around a <cough>lightsaber<endcough> idea.

What about this linework?

SLOWLY GETTING THERE, ANY SUGGESTIONS AS TO COLOUR FOR THE LOGO?

well on you thirteen-spades yours is the 2nd best so far i've seen , tho you gotta refine and refine like
mad to make it all flow nicely....your colors are spot on and is very realistic.. just polish it up really nicely.

as for the text make it something half bright meshing with the fumes back there , green would be nice

At 2/26/08 03:54 AM, thirteen-spades wrote: SLOWLY GETTING THERE, ANY SUGGESTIONS AS TO COLOUR FOR THE LOGO?

I just came 16 times.

Fuck the logo, you could make it neon yellow and that would still look badass.

thanks for the comments, i have mad a few additions such as the the toxin canisters to the gun and extended the tube to the gas maskinto a filter. as for the logo tell what u think, i tried green as well but i thought the white worked better, if you want i can submit the green for comparison

wa also thinking maybe some kind of tattoo?

I decided to go with something different.
still a long way to go and im sure alot of changes ill be making

heh now I feel like a noob after seeing the gas mask one :( anyways I've still got lots of work to do on this one but I'm just trying to get the preliminary shading on (colors will change when I add the bg) any comments?

At 2/26/08 03:23 AM, matiou1 wrote: What about this linework?

It's really good, but what's with the plug?

At 2/26/08 08:50 AM, thirteen-spades wrote: thanks for the comments, i have mad a few additions such as the the toxin canisters to the gun and extended the tube to the gas maskinto a filter. as for the logo tell what u think, i tried green as well but i thought the white worked better, if you want i can submit the green for comparison.

the cable from her sidepack doesn't drape naturally. it arcs over then goes straight down then turns in with no gravity , I'm assuming that part you made without reference?

A new Preview!!!

At 2/26/08 08:50 AM, thirteen-spades wrote: thanks for the comments, i have mad a few additions such as the the toxin canisters to the gun and extended the tube to the gas maskinto a filter. as for the logo tell what u think, i tried green as well but i thought the white worked better, if you want i can submit the green for comparison

this looks really fuckin good. the only crit i have is regarding her ass. those two shadows on her left ass cheek look kind of strange. you could have the shadow from the tubing curve more with her ass cheek because the light part in between those two shadows makes her ass look like she's got some sort of growth. other than that it looks forkin fantastic. especially the gas. good job. semicolon pee.

Changed pirate into rambo-ish girl with an M-16 here it is so far

At 2/26/08 12:47 PM, TransforWhores wrote: A new Preview!!!

God, I love these big lips you draw!!

At 2/26/08 12:27 PM, Dasneviano wrote:

At 2/26/08 03:23 AM, matiou1 wrote: What about this linework?

It's really good, but what's with the plug?

-Hehehe it's part of the concept, she's like a devil girl with a plug at the tip of her tail, craving for electronic goodness, like make her happy or erlse she's pissed n you don't want that.There will be other characters involved with the same concept of wirefed stuff, one will be a foetus with an i-pod attached to the ombilical chord n the other will blow his brain with a nintendo gun, a may post them tonight but as for now I work on the coloring.thx for the reply(the monkey was part of the previous concept I had in mind but I skipped to something else).

I sort of wish I had required to see the reference pictures for all entries but meh.
It's getting really hard to tell what's created and what's basically a tracing of a photograph :p

Also kudos to gas mask guy and weird eagle/owl head woman guy for finding ways to avoid having to draw a face.
<3

damn no more for today!! hehe here's somewhat of a final render of the girl I'll work some more tomorrow and add a bg

pox: I did trace the hips on my ref pic they were driving me insane!!

yeh it seems i can paint bodys pretty well, but ask me to do a face and i fail. i tried it a couple of times. in the end though i just went for the mask.

I still have waaaaaay to go but what do you guys think, is the pespective too much funky for it to look realistic or is it alright?

At 2/26/08 11:51 PM, matiou1 wrote: I still have waaaaaay to go but what do you guys think, is the pespective too much funky for it to look realistic or is it alright?

The perspective is fine, it's her eyes that look a bit weird!

At 2/26/08 11:51 PM, matiou1 wrote: I still have waaaaaay to go but what do you guys think, is the pespective too much funky for it to look realistic or is it alright?

Perspectives awesome, great job.

doing this background sucked. I downloaded a demo version of Cinema 4d and didn't really test it's limitations before I started working. Long story short the background is a composte of 15 screenshots. I work big. yeah.

At 2/26/08 12:35 PM, MindChamber wrote:

At 2/26/08 08:50 AM, thirteen-spades wrote: thanks for the comments, i have mad a few additions such as the the toxin canisters to the gun and extended the tube to the gas maskinto a filter. as for the logo tell what u think, i tried green as well but i thought the white worked better, if you want i can submit the green for comparison.

the cable from her sidepack doesn't drape naturally. it arcs over then goes straight down then turns in with no gravity , I'm assuming that part you made without reference?

lol. no its atually just a cut and paste job of the first pipe up the top. what can i say, i got lazy. but ill go back and fix it up, cheers mindchamber

Groovy stuff. Ever since I read the rule that it doesn't HAVE to be super-realistic (and even one of the kick ass examples is pretty far off from realistic) I decided to scrap my 1st try and go for something funny. I'll still submit the 1st try at reality based smut, mostly because I'm kinda happy with it. Might still toy with it a bit...I did spend a bit of time painting and repainting so that it'd look good inverted. (The original is posted a few pages back...I hate digi-effects but, well, I thought it worked.) Here's that 1st try that, like Pilate, I'm ready toI wipe my hands of.
-jared