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At 2/22/08 01:16 AM, LiftYourSkinnyFists wrote: what do you guys think? i'm going to start on my second submission now.

I like the colors and the degraded cracked look to it. The eyes are weird, and I think it would have been beneficial to just shadow them out entirely than to have them like this. Overall, though, it's nice.

my first one i did working on my second that i will spend much more time on then just 1 day.

Didn't have much time to work on this today. Might not finish in time. if this trend keeps up.

TransforWhores: God dammit that's good. I'm gonna get my ass completely kicked by a nineteen year old girl. ouch.

Alright, a second work in progress, a lot of work done on the figure and the background. I only finished the rough coloring for the face, so the shading is really rough and blocky. The final product will have all the tones blended. Eventually I'll convert everything to lineless coloring. D:

I need help the color scheme for her clothes/belts, and a potential model/make for the gun (I'm not too familiar with guns). The scene is in an elevator. :) All suggestions/critiques/comments are encouraged!

Here's a full-sized picture if it helps any (LARGE - 2400 x 3000, 1.4mb): http://img165.imageshack.us/img165/5111/
hma09of1.jpg

At 2/22/08 02:40 AM, sakerfalcon wrote: Alright, a second work in progress, a lot of work done on the figure and the background.

Amazing!! I really really like the angle on this one. The backgrounds are awesome as well! Good luck!

At 2/22/08 01:16 AM, LiftYourSkinnyFists wrote: final version.
large:
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v287/i vanjarvis/newgroundscontestFINALFINAL.jp g
without all the junk:
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v287/i vanjarvis/newgroundscontestFINALCOPY.jpg

what do you guys think? i'm going to start on my second submission now.

I love it!!! X3 Your Art Cover is my favorite :P

At 2/22/08 12:45 AM, LiftYourSkinnyFists wrote:

At 2/21/08 11:10 PM, TransforWhores wrote: Ouff!!! My neck hurt! XF

I'm looking for critiques n' opinions about my babe??! Any Suggestion or? about the clothes ^^

Full View here

Heey that's really good, i like the clean line work. it's going to look awsome when it's finished. post more updates! what do you have in store for a background?

Honestly!!! I don't what to do with the background!I'll finish the babe! and after mayby I'll have find a good idea for the background XD

I know this is an almost irrelevant question, but I really can't make up my mind. What do you guys think of the tattoo on her belly? Should I leave it there or not? (The cover without it can be seen here.)
Thanks!

Sounds pretty cool. I might actually participate.

At 2/22/08 01:16 AM, LiftYourSkinnyFists wrote: final version.
large:
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v287/i vanjarvis/newgroundscontestFINALFINAL.jp g
without all the junk:
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v287/i vanjarvis/newgroundscontestFINALCOPY.jpg

what do you guys think? i'm going to start on my second submission now.

Nice but the lady is kind of ugly.

A little color update! ^^

At 2/22/08 02:34 PM, TransforWhores wrote: A little color update! ^^

Fuck that is so fucking cool.

And Liftyourskinnyfists, looks fucking amazing.

God I love you people.

Right in the ass.

Hard.

Like a fucking rock.

With spikes.

This is my second idea more realistic ^__^ This one will be fantasic!

At 2/22/08 03:54 PM, Lamoureux wrote:

At 2/22/08 02:34 PM, TransforWhores wrote: A little color update! ^^

Fuck that is so fucking cool.

And Liftyourskinnyfists, looks fucking amazing.

God I love you people.

Right in the ass.

Hard.

Like a fucking rock.

With spikes.

You rock too Men!!! :3

I finished and posted my final...thanks for all the helpful comments...I may do another

High Resolution

http://attempted.deviantart.com/art/Heav y-Metal-Magazine-Cover-78136259

At 2/22/08 02:34 PM, TransforWhores wrote: A little color update! ^^

It looks nice, but the ass is all weird. It goes out really far.

I hope to finish the skin soon! ^^

At 2/22/08 08:16 PM, TransforWhores wrote: I hope to finish the skin soon! ^^

Hot stuff, very nice. 5/5

New WIP, started colouring and toning the legs. If the skin colour is strange, tell me please. (I'm colourblind.)

well just a semi-update, finished the lines (finally). I do have the base colors already up and am doing most of the lighting, but i don't like to post unfinished work so i prly won't post again till i enter the final D: hope the anonomy is cool, but, at this point, I wouldn't make any corrections anyway x3 oh and don't worry about those squigglys in the bg, it'll just be a mob of undetailed zombies

btw where did most of the entries backgrounds go :D

Higher-res

Do you have a suggestion to put something more fantasy?

At 2/22/08 11:57 PM, TransforWhores wrote: Do you have a suggestion to put something more fantasy?

come on! i know you can do a better background then that! it's looking good, but i want you to add a better background! and are you going to finish your other one? that one was lookin pretty good.

At 2/22/08 11:57 PM, TransforWhores wrote: Do you have a suggestion to put something more fantasy?

thats one lazy lookin background

At 2/22/08 11:57 PM, TransforWhores wrote: Do you have a suggestion to put something more fantasy?

Hmm, that's a hard one... maybe you could elaborate on the eye tattoo idea and have a whole mess of eyes everywhere. She could have, like, and eye necklace, and an eye ring (kind of like the one in Beastmaster), and in the background, there could be gothic walls and pillars with eye designs in them, as if watching her, or giant eye monsters or something. Maybe one of them could be on a leash, or she could be held on a leash by one of them... that's one idea just off the top of my head...

Is not the official background!!! and I know for the second eyes! :s

again only got to work on this like an hour. The goal is to use very little black. As much color as possible. It might end up looking like technicolor vomit when it's done, but I wanted to capture the feel of those 1980's heavy metal magazines. My dad used to have a bunch, and I'd raid them even though they were "not appropriate for my age".

At 2/22/08 01:14 PM, Dasneviano wrote: I know this is an almost irrelevant question, but I really can't make up my mind. What do you guys think of the tattoo on her belly? Should I leave it there or not? (The cover without it can be seen here.)
Thanks!

It looks good. I might make the lines more crisp overall, but other than that I think it's great.

At 2/20/08 01:43 PM, Murder-Inc wrote:

At 2/20/08 12:36 PM, MindChamber wrote: ya how about an interesting background?

Excellent suggestion.

I guess it really wasn't lolz.

Nobody here probably listens to metal.

Where is the corpse paint? Or the satanic pentigrams? death metal forever!

wow these are all turning out pretty heavy.....................metal that is. lol semicolon pee. hey mindchamber. i also like big butts as well.too.