The Enchanted Cave 2
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COMPLETE edition of the interactive "choose next panel" comic
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Ok, this is my first comic ever. Tried to make it clear and smooth talking about lines.
This first part is only a sequence of the story, ive made more.
Critiques are always welcome... constructive ones better.
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"Put Smarties tubes on cats legs, make them walk like a robot."
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That's a weird style you have there. I like it, though.
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ok here goes the next page...this is the explotion take from different angles. I wanted to show that eplotion was really a big thing.
I promise more dialogues in the next page
thanks for the coments!
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this is pretty nice. there isn't much criticism that could be handed out other than if you scanned these you should set the dpi a little higher because the smaller print words are fuzzy.
it's a nice concept, the art is good. i like the use of tone. what is the title? are you thinking about inking this on your pc, or leaving it b&w?
Evil spelled backwards is Live and we all want to do that now don't we.
Deny the big lie, don't beLIEve and don't conform.
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At 2/5/08 03:38 PM, SirSeraphdeFallen wrote: this is pretty nice. there isn't much criticism that could be handed out other than if you scanned these you should set the dpi a little higher because the smaller print words are fuzzy.
it's a nice concept, the art is good. i like the use of tone. what is the title? are you thinking about inking this on your pc, or leaving it b&w?
Ya, the resolution is really bad, but NG dont let me to upload a higher resolution image.
The title is Full Time Warriors:
Its about a 4 hero story from an other planet. They discover using new tecnologies something happened in our planet a long time ago( this 2 pages ) and discovered they were involved in that thing...the plot continues when they try to stop that atack...And now i leave that to your imagination caus if I tell you all the comic would be usless lol.
I think im going to ink this on my pc exept for the lines which are 100% traditional. Many things depend on your messages
Thanks for the coment !!
