Character for new flash game

[MasterFury]

Just a pic of the main character for a game that i m going to make.
The image is called "The one arm ninja"
here is a link to a high rez version

[ZekeySpaceyLizard]

He looks more like a knight or a paladin than a ninja.

It's pretty though.

[Darkaxl]

At 2/3/08 05:59 AM, MasterFury wrote: Just a pic of the main character for a game that i m going to make.
The image is called "The one arm ninja"
here is a link to a high rez version

Looks like he has 2 peni' coming down both of his legs, work on your clothing/creases/seams

Apart from that and the size problems s'nice

[Revolation]

Its nice, but you should work on the
shading on the chest plate and hair....

[MRat]

Looks pretty good, but I agree with Zekey, he hardly looks like a ninja at all. I like the 1 arm idea though. Could be pretty interesting.

[MasterFury]

Ye I know he dosnt look much like a ninja, it was some of the design choices that i made.
I did at one point have the scarf over his face and smaller armor.
I just ran with the ninja idea even after the chatacte slowly changed to what i have here.

so what do you think I should make him for the actual game?

Any way thanks for the feed back.

[MindChamber]

the body is jacked..

work on your bone and muscles, you spend too much time playing with filters , overlays, and effects. when the base structure of your drawing is weak.

[MasterFury]

At 2/3/08 07:49 PM, MindChamber wrote: the body is jacked..

work on your bone and muscles, you spend too much time playing with filters , overlays, and effects. when the base structure of your drawing is weak.

lol, just has helpful as always.

the color is actulay the least amout of time spent on the pic.

[MindChamber]

At 2/3/08 07:54 PM, MasterFury wrote:

At 2/3/08 07:49 PM, MindChamber wrote: the body is jacked..

work on your bone and muscles, you spend too much time playing with filters , overlays, and effects. when the base structure of your drawing is weak.

lol, just has helpful as always.

you can take the advice or laugh it off.

either way it doesnt hurt me none.

[MasterFury]

At 2/3/08 07:56 PM, MindChamber wrote: you can take the advice or laugh it off.

either way it doesnt hurt me none.

yea, I should actualy thank you, it is usefull advice.

[Ponz]

lol he basically bitched you.

But yea, its an alright drawing i have to admit i like the coloring and stuff or whatever