Damn, I'm Good.

[Spags]

I don't know about NG, but I am VERY proud of this.
The quality is lowered by this upload though.
This is one of my friends, who is a very good photographer, and I remade it.

[P-51]

it's not bad. it has this unique look to it.

[RedDreadSky]

Traced?

[1337man]

sure looks like it

[SmilingIdiot]

that really doesnt look traced but okay.....its looking good but the nose area has a darker shade and on yours the nose seems to go away from where its supose to be....but it looks pretty good and good job to ya man

[Spags]

:At 1/25/08 09:46 PM, RedDreadSky wrote:

Traced?

:: At 1/25/08 09:48 Pm, 1337man wrote:
:: sure looks like it

I am proud to say, that I did NOT trace it.
BETCHEZ.

[BlackmarketKraig]

At 1/25/08 09:39 PM, Spaghetti14 wrote: I don't know about NG, but I am VERY proud of this.
The quality is lowered by this upload though.
This is one of my friends, who is a very good photographer, and I remade it.

The eye needs a reflection in it, otherwise it appears flat and lifeless. The shape of the eye could be improved a bit, but altogether it isn't bad, just get that reflection in there.

[Spags]

At 1/25/08 09:59 PM, BlackmarketKraig wrote: The eye needs a reflection in it, otherwise it appears flat and lifeless. The shape of the eye could be improved a bit, but altogether it isn't bad, just get that reflection in there.

Reflection where?

[1337man]

Everything is a bit to pointy, if you were to round it off im sure it would look better.

[BlackmarketKraig]

At 1/25/08 10:03 PM, Spaghetti14 wrote:
Reflection where?

There...

[JOHNNYVANITY]

At 1/25/08 09:48 PM, 1337man wrote: sure looks like it

Its not traced. Don't be a fuckhead.

In regards to drawing.

The lines are to jagged and sharp! the lines should be smooth and flowing, the same as the eyelashes ( which could be thicker)

good stuff

[Crazy-Inovation]

At 1/25/08 09:51 PM, SmilingIdiot wrote: that really doesnt look traced but okay.....its looking good but the nose area has a darker shade and on yours the nose seems to go away from where its supose to be....but it looks pretty good and good job to ya man

The texture of the eye is in direct contrast with the skin.

[SnakeSkull]

Adding on the what BMK said, the eyebrow looks too bunched up. Try separating the hairs on the brow a little more.

[Spags]

At 1/25/08 11:04 PM, Crazy-Inovation wrote: The texture of the eye is in direct contrast with the skin.

Is that good or bad?

At: 1/25/08 11:18 PM, TheSnakeSkull wrote:

Adding on the what BMK said, the eyebrow looks too bunched up. Try separating the hairs on the brow a little more.

Like this?

[SnakeSkull]

At 1/25/08 11:58 PM, Spaghetti14 wrote:

At: 1/25/08 11:18 PM, TheSnakeSkull wrote:

Adding on the what BMK said, the eyebrow looks too bunched up. Try separating the hairs on the brow a little more.

Like this?

Yes, that's a lot better. Now I would just fix the outline of the eye.

[Spags]

At 1/26/08 12:00 AM, TheSnakeSkull wrote: Yes, that's a lot better. Now I would just fix the outline of the eye.

Could you be a bit specific?
I'm not quite sure what to do to it.
Sorry..

[SnakeSkull]

At 1/26/08 12:03 AM, Spaghetti14 wrote:

At 1/26/08 12:00 AM, TheSnakeSkull wrote: Yes, that's a lot better. Now I would just fix the outline of the eye.

Could you be a bit specific?
I'm not quite sure what to do to it.
Sorry..

At the top left part of the eye, it is way to strait. You should redraw it, and make it round.

[Spags]

At 1/26/08 12:13 AM, TheSnakeSkull wrote: At the top left part of the eye, it is way to strait. You should redraw it, and make it round.

How bout now?
Even if it isn't anatomically correct, I think I like it now.
What about NG?
What are your people's opinions?

[SnakeSkull]

At 1/26/08 12:29 AM, Spaghetti14 wrote:

At 1/26/08 12:13 AM, TheSnakeSkull wrote: At the top left part of the eye, it is way to strait. You should redraw it, and make it round.

How bout now?

I really don't see too much of a difference.

[Spags]

At 1/26/08 12:39 AM, TheSnakeSkull wrote:

I really don't see too much of a difference.

I thinned it out.
Did you mean to say the top right part of the eye?
Because I didn't do anything to that part.

[SnakeSkull]

At 1/26/08 12:43 AM, Spaghetti14 wrote:

At 1/26/08 12:39 AM, TheSnakeSkull wrote:

Did you mean to say the top right part of the eye?
Because I didn't do anything to that part.

Shit, I did, I feel so retarded right now.

[Rig]

The problem with your eye is...
- that the curve of the eyelids around it is uneven and choppy
- the shadows on the eyeball are uneven and blotchy
- no reflection

Right now it looks like a greyish-white puddle. Look at the curve of the bottom eyelid in the photo, then look at your version. Can you see the difference?

[Spags]

At 1/26/08 01:04 AM, Rig wrote: The problem with your eye is...
- that the curve of the eyelids around it is uneven and choppy
- the shadows on the eyeball are uneven and blotchy
- no reflection

Right now it looks like a greyish-white puddle. Look at the curve of the bottom eyelid in the photo, then look at your version. Can you see the difference?

Thanks for mentioning any of the positive things...
That's why the call it "constructive" criticism.

[Spags]

At 1/26/08 01:07 AM, PrinceFlea wrote: Hey what kind of rendering software are you using to make this 3 dimensional representation?The the posters who were impossing that this was an trace were obviously asses.I swear I trace is going over an original picture.

Wow, I must be good if you think I used 3D software.
I used Photoshop.
=D

Speaking of which, I fixed up the eye.
A lot.

[RedDreadSky]

The main thing is that the eyebrow looks like a feather glued to her forehead. Make thinner lines that make it look hairy.

[Spags]

At 1/26/08 02:18 AM, RedDreadSky wrote: The main thing is that the eyebrow looks like a feather glued to her forehead. Make thinner lines that make it look hairy.

Well, she liked it!

[reality-monkey]

well, i think you SHOULD trace it (dont post that, everyonell hate you for it) but just so you can get the feel of the brush strokes you are trying to recreate, and where they would go, how curvasious they are...and the nose needs some real form...remembering, your not trying to copy a picture, your trying to make it look 3 dimensionally sound, which will take some judgement on your part...

btw do you have a tablet? just curious, cause that could explain the blockiness and what not if you didnt...

[Spags]

At 1/26/08 02:59 AM, reality-monkey wrote: well, i think you SHOULD trace it (dont post that, everyonell hate you for it) but just so you can get the feel of the brush strokes you are trying to recreate, and where they would go, how curvasious they are...and the nose needs some real form...remembering, your not trying to copy a picture, your trying to make it look 3 dimensionally sound, which will take some judgement on your part...

btw do you have a tablet? just curious, cause that could explain the blockiness and what not if you didnt...

Thanks for the suggestions, but I'm happy with it now.
And I do have a tablet, I am just young and not too good with it.
There, I worked on the eyebrow a bit.

[Spags]

Any more suggestions or ideas for it?

[JewelCrafter]

2'nd page? Also, has anybody noticed there's too much "meat" on the left (from your point of view) part of the eye? Seriously! Don't take this as an insult.