Do you think I should color this?

[xGlitchx]

Hey, should I color this?

<img src="http://i275.photobucket.com/albums/
jj289/Fuzzy14_2011/Heart001.jpg" border="0" alt="Heart, Tulip, &amp;amp; Ring">

If so it would be traced with a black fine point tip pen. The ring's band would be silver, and the jewel would be amethyst. Heart would obviously be red, the ribbon will be blue (Maybe, say what you think it should be). Also the tulip a yellowish pinkish color.

[xGlitchx]

At 1/21/08 10:00 AM, xGlitchx wrote: <img src="http://i275.photobucket.com/albums/
jj289/Fuzzy14_2011/Heart001.jpg" border="0" alt="Heart, Tulip, &amp;amp; Ring">

My bad.

[BazookaNinja]

Sure, but touch up all the shapes first, they're awkward.

[High-off-cheese]

its very basic

[Bothcamo]

Too liney.. but shape them up and then colour

[xGlitchx]

Yea, it is bad, I'm touching it up now before I even attempt to color anything. Yea I know it's basic, but my point was made when my girlfriend saw it.

[Vortex00]

At 1/21/08 10:07 AM, xGlitchx wrote: Yea, it is bad, I'm touching it up now before I even attempt to color anything.

You should fix up that banner on the right side, make it curve around like uh.. 3d .. you know what I'm sayin'?

And the rose, define some petals, as it now it' looks kinda like origami.

[BazookaNinja]

the bottom of the rose looks like a tiny penis :º

[xGlitchx]

At 1/21/08 10:21 AM, BazookaNinja wrote: the bottom of the rose looks like a tiny penis :º

xD Lmao... That's funny..

[Vortex00]

example

[xGlitchx]

Anyone got tips on the ring?

[Hellpuppet]

I just read this topic and thought it would be a nice idea to post my heart:)

[xGlitchx]

Now take a look and see what you think of it.

[crumblenet]

At 1/21/08 03:16 PM, xGlitchx wrote: Now take a look and see what you think of it.

very very basic.
Could easily be drawn and colored in 15 min.
add more detail

[Hellpuppet]

It would look better if you would make the heart smaller and the rose alot bigger. The left side of the ribbon is too thick while the right side is too thin. It would realy look nice if you would make that ring through the heart, like a piercieng or something.

[Krazy-Rex]

I think the rose is smaller then before now.

[Cyberdevil]

At 1/21/08 10:04 AM, High-off-cheese wrote: its very basic

Agreed. It definatly needs colot to it, preferable a littl lighting and shading as well.

[LilFugitive]

Colour it, but use shading, make the shapes a bit more organic

[mastermalpass]

Lot's of colour, Fill that heart! :D and Golden up the ring and coloure up that stone in it. But keep it like a water colour drawing, we don't want it becoming to plush or it looks cartoony. Good work with your base.

[xGlitchx]

Thanks guys for all your comments!
I failed to mention my lack of drawing ability.