Raing Ash concept art

[PubicTears]

Hey :)
I making my first animation :)
So I thought I shall show some concept work off. Hope you like them I will put more on when I draw them.

[PubicTears]

Another one!
Constructive criticism is very welcome.

[willobeen]

reminds me of the enemies in half-life, nice work but tighten up your lines.

[PubicTears]

And for anybody that is interested heres a Trailer

[mranarchy]

At 1/20/08 05:57 PM, PubicTears wrote: Another one!
Constructive criticism is very welcome.

oh I like that one alot...only thing I would say about it is that the symmetry is not always accurate (eg-the mid sections of the boots)

[P-51]

At 1/20/08 06:28 PM, PubicTears wrote: And for anybody that is interested heres a Trailer

looking smooth.

[Kajenx]

The flash looks cool. Gotta love that song.

[PubicTears]

At 1/20/08 06:57 PM, Kajenx wrote: The flash looks cool.

Thanks heres another one.
Just a sketch nothing much

[Hammi]

I rather like the first pic. Very nice flow in it. I dont see any arms (???) xP

The second though, you need to work more on his knees. And the arms arent normally that long. They would rather hang down just about to the hips. Just look at the fingers as they reach the hiplines. Also, the hands need work too.

Other than that, i love the detailed flow in your drawings that i can taste it :D

[PubicTears]

At 1/20/08 06:59 PM, Hammi wrote: I dont see any arms (???) xP

I dont usualy add arms to my side on views... Haha:P not sure why

[lardass69]

Love the first pic. The second and third need some anatomy work, though. The arms are too long (on both) as Hammi pointed out, and the elbows and knees are too thin. Also, the neck seems short on the second one to me. Cool concepts; just iron out the anatomy a little.

[PubicTears]

At 1/20/08 07:43 PM, lardass69 wrote: just iron out the anatomy a little.

Ok will do :)

[PubicTears]

At 1/21/08 08:39 AM, PrinceFlea wrote:

At 1/20/08 06:28 PM, PubicTears wrote: And for anybody that is interested heres a Trailer

This flash already looks like it has potential It seems pretty promising! Is this like based on terrorism ?

I wont give away the plot, but...

America getting nuked is just the tip of the iceberg. There has been conspiracys and scandals and with country which will all be revealed.

[Ynek]

Really nice... I like your trailer. It's short, and to-the-point.

It's nice to see an animation which isn't totally revolved around comedy for once... It's refreshing to find something different.

And one little question - Where the hell can I get a copy of that soundtrack? I've looked all over the place for it, but I can't find it anywhere...

[AwesomeSaurus]

Cool trailer! I have always loved that music from LOTR. As for the sketches, they are coming along nicely, I just think the first side view pose is too static. The guy looks rigid, and I wouldn't think he would be that straight up. Give the muscles a little flexibility. Overall quite nice though!

[PubicTears]

At 1/21/08 10:30 AM, Ynek wrote: Where the hell can I get a copy of that soundtrack?

Glad you like it. As for the song its the Requim for a Dream Soundtrack. Hope that helps.

[Dalario]

At 1/20/08 06:59 PM, PubicTears wrote:

At 1/20/08 06:57 PM, Kajenx wrote: The flash looks cool.

Thanks heres another one.
Just a sketch nothing much

Love this one !

[PubicTears]

Done on the computer.
I didnt draw the M4. I got that from here
Sorry if quality has been reduced.

[raveninskyprime]

I like the detail of the soldier, however I think perhaps it would be neat to see him in a more offensive posture (knees bent and torso arked forward with the weapon at the ready). Because right now he looks like he's joshing around with a buddy of his.

[PubicTears]

At 1/27/08 05:52 PM, raveninskyprime wrote: I think perhaps it would be neat to see him in a more offensive posture.

Is that any better? :D