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The Nightfly Part 1

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BrianEtrius
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The Nightfly Part 1 2008-01-09 23:10:43 Reply

The rain comes down hard in the night. Street lights glow in the puddles. The traffic reverses as normal people in their normal lifes go back to their normal houses in their normal cars to have another normal night. Lucky bastards.
As for me, hell knows what's in storm for tonight. They say home is were the heart is, but my heart's been cold for a long time. Guess I don't belong anywhere.
Only got 2 friends, a speaker who argues and is always loaded, and a helper who keeps me loaded. Both have seen the world with me. They've seen the ups and downs, the good and the bad.
BANG! A shot rings out. Almost instantly my speaker friend comes out. He's ready to do his dirty deeds. I walk up the alley, listening to the rain come down and hit the streets. The street lights pierce the night a dark yellow. A car alarm goes off in the distance, taking my eyes off a shadow that I had just seen in the corner off my eye. The shadow moves in the night, watching all. The shadow knows I'm here, waiting for him. We both know only one will come out alive. Till then I'll be watching you.....................................
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.........................TO BE CONTINUED


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Response to The Nightfly Part 1 2008-01-09 23:25:45 Reply

Its a good story, BUT STORIES go into your user page.

HA HA HA

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