The Enchanted Cave 2
Delve into a strange cave with a seemingly endless supply of treasure, strategically choos
4.39 / 5.00 38,635 ViewsGhostbusters B.I.P.
COMPLETE edition of the interactive "choose next panel" comic
4.09 / 5.00 15,161 ViewsOk it looks good at a quick glance but there are a few anatomy/proportional problems.
Red - There is some major anatomy screw up here, the back seems to be pretruding out way to far and dosen't seem to match the waist.
Yellow - I understand that you were trying to define the muscles, but this looks completely detached, looks alot like a chicken breast.
DarkBlue - You already know about the lips, thin them out a little.
LightBlue - Once again the body is messed up, im not sure where it ends , and where the arm is, maybe thats a colouring problem. There's a good Tutorial Here.
Polykarbon suggesting that you think of the body as a bean, believe me it works 95% of the time.
I wish you luck
The character is nice, but, just two things. The one is as you know, the lips, just make them a little thiner. Secondly the arm muscle is a little messed up, it doesn't need so many lines, believe me. Other than that its nice.