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Lolololol I'm back 2008-01-02 17:40:28 Reply

And I've improved ever so slightly!P.SYou Like my signature?Plus Do I have the human body structure down?

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Response to Lolololol I'm back 2008-01-02 17:42:10 Reply

I'm no anatomy expert, but at first glance, I'd say the legs are a little long-ish.


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Response to Lolololol I'm back 2008-01-02 17:44:25 Reply

At 1/2/08 05:42 PM, RedDreadSky wrote: I'm no anatomy expert, but at first glance, I'd say the legs are a little long-ish.

This better?

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Response to Lolololol I'm back 2008-01-02 17:49:07 Reply

moving the head a little bit to the right couldn't hurt. it looks abit off with the whole structure of the body.

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Response to Lolololol I'm back 2008-01-02 17:49:13 Reply

This is now my failure thread ...I mean art thread.I also made this.

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Response to Lolololol I'm back 2008-01-02 17:51:57 Reply

At 1/2/08 05:49 PM, Pow3rCrazy wrote: This is now my failure thread ...I mean art thread.I also made this.

like the idea of the skirt. you might aswel put that anatomy-skeleton to use, dress it up abit and give it a tray of cookies and name it motherbot 9200 beta.

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Response to Lolololol I'm back 2008-01-02 17:52:16 Reply

that better?The program i'm using is Corel Painter essentials 2.I'm wondering If I should get flash or PhotoShop.

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Response to Lolololol I'm back 2008-01-02 18:06:35 Reply

At 1/2/08 05:52 PM, Pow3rCrazy wrote: that better?The program i'm using is Corel Painter essentials 2.I'm wondering If I should get flash or PhotoShop.

Corel painter is an amazing program, stick with it. Things can come out really nicely if you use that program right.

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Response to Lolololol I'm back 2008-01-02 18:18:52 Reply

At 1/2/08 05:51 PM, DarkSytze wrote:
At 1/2/08 05:49 PM, Pow3rCrazy wrote: This is now my failure thread ...I mean art thread.I also made this.
like the idea of the skirt. you might aswel put that anatomy-skeleton to use, dress it up abit and give it a tray of cookies and name it motherbot 9200 beta.

Nah dude I can't I suck at drawing woman anatomy so I'll fuck it up pretty badly.I'm trying to get a hang of male anatomy so after that maybe I'll make a motherbot beta.


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Response to Lolololol I'm back 2008-01-02 19:02:27 Reply

I would say that the legs were the correct length to begin with, but you've kinda made them so thin that they just look like they're too long.
I would beef 'em up a bit.


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Response to Lolololol I'm back 2008-01-02 19:21:40 Reply

At 1/2/08 07:02 PM, Ynek wrote: I would say that the legs were the correct length to begin with, but you've kinda made them so thin that they just look like they're too long.
I would beef 'em up a bit.

I kinda messed up the left arm.also I didnt put up a layer for a guideline so I had to do it over the guidline.

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Response to Lolololol I'm back 2008-01-02 19:26:45 Reply

At 1/2/08 07:21 PM, Pow3rCrazy wrote:
At 1/2/08 07:02 PM, Ynek wrote: I would say that the legs were the correct length to begin with, but you've kinda made them so thin that they just look like they're too long.
I would beef 'em up a bit.
I kinda messed up the left arm.also I didnt put up a layer for a guideline so I had to do it over the guidline.

Shoulders are generally about a head's width each, so your dude's looking a little slouchy/scrawny. The guideline for the eyes is too high-- it's supposed to be located at the center of the head. But you're off to a pretty good start, keep it up.

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Response to Lolololol I'm back 2008-01-02 19:30:27 Reply

At 1/2/08 07:26 PM, ImaFreekozoid wrote:
At 1/2/08 07:21 PM, Pow3rCrazy wrote:
At 1/2/08 07:02 PM, Ynek wrote: I would say that the legs were the correct length to begin with, but you've kinda made them so thin that they just look like they're too long.
I would beef 'em up a bit.
I kinda messed up the left arm.also I didnt put up a layer for a guideline so I had to do it over the guidline.
Shoulders are generally about a head's width each, so your dude's looking a little slouchy/scrawny. The guideline for the eyes is too high-- it's supposed to be located at the center of the head. But you're off to a pretty good start, keep it up.

Aw sweet a few months ago I made this monstrocity so I guess I can finally rest in peace.
Thank god I've improved from the picture below.

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Response to Lolololol I'm back 2008-01-02 19:32:58 Reply

I made this for a draw the guys username and as you can see his username in the picture I kinda wan't in the mood for sex so I drew that instead of the actual meaning.

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Response to Lolololol I'm back 2008-01-02 19:33:47 Reply

I tried to fix it, and I think I did ok, but your body thing is kind of slanted and it's a bit disproportionate.

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Response to Lolololol I'm back 2008-01-02 19:36:41 Reply

Also, feet are the length of the forearm (don't believe me, check for yourself).

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Response to Lolololol I'm back 2008-01-02 20:12:03 Reply

Made new sig.

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Response to Lolololol I'm back 2008-01-02 21:02:27 Reply

I don't know what to draw.


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Response to Lolololol I'm back 2008-01-02 22:04:32 Reply

At 1/2/08 09:02 PM, Pow3rCrazy wrote: I don't know what to draw.

draw some more people. ur doing good. your first drawing was quite proportionate. the legs are supposed to be long, so whoever said they were too long is a fool.

keep up the good work!

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Response to Lolololol I'm back 2008-01-02 22:23:21 Reply

herrrre

i may have forgotten some stuff

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