Some stuff

[katfleas]

I made for an invitation. First time using this technique so can you give me some constructive criticism on how to improve it?

[Ynek]

Well, at a glance, I can say that your bottle's label is a bit iffy.... Rather than drawing the label as a simple rectangle, you ought to try drawing it as a 'slur' shape.
Since I fail at describing such things verbally, here is an MS paint visual aid....

[katfleas]

At 12/30/07 04:16 PM, Ynek wrote: Well, at a glance, I can say that your bottle's label is a bit iffy.... Rather than drawing the label as a simple rectangle, you ought to try drawing it as a 'slur' shape.
Since I fail at describing such things verbally, here is an MS paint visual aid....

Thanks i'll fix it

[katfleas]

I like it if someone had a horrible death.

[RedDreadSky]

Are they supposed to be together? They all have different light sources for there shading.

[katfleas]

At 12/30/07 05:07 PM, RedDreadSky wrote: Are they supposed to be together? They all have different light sources for there shading.

No, they were made seperately

[katfleas]

Half an hour work. There is a car but i hid it cause it was totally rushed.