WIP animation... comments?

[SkySausage]

I made this actually for the "this is my style!" collab, but then the thread got locked. i've been working on it anyway, because it started off pretty well. i just want some comments on the short movie.

also, if there's any collab or whatever that this can fit into, please let me know.

Here it is. "blob"

[steelsoldier]

Looks interesting, althought i think it should be a little faster

[El-Presidente]

It doesn't make much sense. I don't really understand what's supposed to be going on, so maybe if you made that clearer we could tell you a little more. I don't particularly like the blobs though. Also, try doing more than just the shapes and do highlighting and shading to make it look more realistic.

[sirtom93]

Thats kinda weird. Not really sure if you have not much or alot of potential.

[Coolio-Niato]

I think it would look better:

a) the red blobs dissapearring had some sort of style to them
b) if the whole movie stage was smaller, so we dont have to look around the entire screen to watch whats going on.

The gun thing was hypnotic.

[SkySausage]

well, it isn't supposed to mean anything much. kind of artsy-random i suppose? anyways. thanks all~