Comments needed

[jipostus]

Okay, i have been busy making this for last few days, and i'd like to get some comments...
FF X: Retardness

I know, it might have some typo's cause English isn't my native language, and so on...

(And to forum mods: sorry, i posted this to Art section at first, but i made a new one in here, so delete that one, okay?)

[Paradox]

You're progressing through the story of FFX too quickly. Slow down a bit and try to find more potential lulz within the storyline.

[jipostus]

At 12/27/07 12:25 PM, Paradox wrote: You're progressing through the story of FFX too quickly. Slow down a bit and try to find more potential lulz within the storyline.

Thanks, I'll remember that one, if i continue that.

[jipostus]

*bumb*

Second part is finished. Also, made a new logo xD

[jipostus]

And i forgot that i changed the extension of the index to PHP...
here's new link