Characters for my upcoming movie.

[TheRealGreenEagle]

Here are a bunch of guys for my upcoming series. And monsters too.

Give me some constructive criticism, its not too late to change stuff.

Its Kerian, main character, and Its him with and without his suit, and his weapon.

[akoRn]

Well, Im not exactly a pro. But I've prepared a drawing for u below.
As u in Diagram 1, I've labeled some of the part u need to make ur character more alive

And I do suggest u give more space for the chest. That making the character look fat.
No offence, juz tryin to help

[Jizzlebang]

At 12/8/07 05:31 AM, akoRn wrote:

And I do suggest u give more space for the chest. That making the character look fat.
No offence, juz tryin to help

Obviously, arms go down to our knees.

[akoRn]

Yea, that drawing took me less than 3minute to do, I juz go crazy on it.
Hope it help ya. BUT the important part is the groin.

No guts, No Glory. HAHA!

[TheRealGreenEagle]

Nah, its supposed to stay simple, not Anime-like. But I agree, the waist and chest look a bit off.

[R3dF0x]

I think you should give him a neck and shade parts of his clothes, so it looks more realistic.

[TheRealGreenEagle]

Here we go, a quick revamp.

[TheRealGreenEagle]

At 12/8/07 07:16 PM, Spinister wrote: sucks dick, learn how to draw fagot

Oh, so you can talk, motherfucker? I scroll through your flash, and what do I find? Crew/legion standard shit, movies that suck other peoples ideas and recycle them as unwanted garbage. And in general, I dont think you can pass judgment on my work, because you have the IQ of the dead rat in your sock drawer.

Go make yourself useful, and remove yourself from the gene pool .

[Gmagnum]

At 12/8/07 07:21 PM, TheRealGreenEagle wrote:

At 12/8/07 07:16 PM, Spinister wrote: sucks dick, learn how to draw fagot

Oh, so you can talk, motherfucker? I scroll through your flash, and what do I find? Crew/legion standard shit, movies that suck other peoples ideas and recycle them as unwanted garbage. And in general, I dont think you can pass judgment on my work, because you have the IQ of the dead rat in your sock drawer.

Go make yourself useful, and remove yourself from the gene pool .

fucking lol

I'm petty sure all of that stuff is Star Syndicate. Which is much better than any of the those drawings of yours. You shouldn't act like such a bitch when flaming people more respected than you.

Learn how to draw you little shit :3

[Spinister]

At 12/8/07 07:21 PM, TheRealGreenEagle wrote: Go make yourself useful, and remove yourself from the gene pool .

oh well golly gee i thought i

[Anigen]

it's obvious who's the real talent here. just calm down and accept the constructive criticism that spinister gives you, alright? after all, he is a professional.

[Spinister]

At 12/8/07 07:46 PM, AniGen wrote: it's obvious who's the real talent here. just calm down and accept the constructive criticism that spinister gives you, alright? after all, he is a professional.

the lette is Z

[BlackmarketKraig]

At 12/8/07 07:46 PM, AniGen wrote: it's obvious who's the real talent here. just calm down and accept the constructive criticism that spinister gives you, alright? after all, he is a professional.

A professional troll. Flaming isn't allowed here, no mater what talents you may think you possess.

[Fatchaos]

At 12/8/07 08:24 PM, BlackmarketKraig wrote:

At 12/8/07 07:46 PM, AniGen wrote: it's obvious who's the real talent here. just calm down and accept the constructive criticism that spinister gives you, alright? after all, he is a professional.

A professional troll. Flaming isn't allowed here, no mater what talents you may think you possess.

I agree. And for the record, people are forgetting that comments like"your art sucks" is not a constructive critic. It's not even critic.
And I really dont appreciate when people post 'better' art in someone else's thread just to show how 'good' & 'better' you are.

You have some areas you could improve, like the hip. But it's not all bad, I mean it works.
It just looks a bit too plain.
And try to calm down TheRealGreenEagle, I know this must be more than a bit frustrating right now...

[TheRealGreenEagle]

Dont fucking patronise me. I just dont like spammers, flamers and trolls, no matter whos work is involved. No, my work aint the best, but its far from the worst. And this is my first try at this stuff, so hey. You want to flame, take it to the Inbox.

[1sparrow]

where's the love? lol

[KumoriKid]

nice

[TheRealGreenEagle]

The love died when this thread was infested with StarSyndicate and other assorted rifraf. Anything CONSTRUCTIVE?

[Cabbster]

At 12/8/07 07:38 PM, Gmagnum wrote:

I'm petty sure all of that stuff is Star Syndicate. Which is much better than any of the those drawings of yours.

This part is clearly a joke.

You shouldn't act like such a bitch when flaming people more respected than you.

See above

Learn how to draw you little shit :3

Go away you pathetic cunt, you only came here to find something to flame.

[Gmagnum]

At 12/9/07 03:42 AM, TheRealGreenEagle wrote: The love died when this thread was infested with StarSyndicate and other assorted rifraf. Anything CONSTRUCTIVE?

use the brush tool and custom colors

[Gmagnum]

At 12/9/07 03:54 AM, Cabbster wrote:

At 12/8/07 07:38 PM, Gmagnum wrote:

This part is clearly a joke.

See above

Those weren't jokes

Learn how to draw you little shit :3

Go away you pathetic cunt, you only came here to find something to flame.

ehh, he had it coming

[PrinceFlea]

At 12/8/07 06:59 PM, TheRealGreenEagle wrote: Here we go, a quick revamp.

Whoa that was so quick That I could hardly recognize the any real changes actually. You should really do something on your anatomy and shading.

[ZekeySpaceyLizard]

At 12/9/07 03:42 AM, TheRealGreenEagle wrote: The love died when this thread was infested with StarSyndicate and other assorted rifraf. Anything CONSTRUCTIVE?

Try learning how to draw.

[Lamoureux]

This thread lacks meaning. Please post some more art, Jesus.

[TheRealGreenEagle]

Yea, I would, but fuckwads won't leave my thread, and I'm not going to post art just so its going to be flamed. All I ever wanted to know was how I could improve. I've got a little, so you guys can just fuck the hell off, go hump a dead rabbit or something. I aint posting here.

[Cabbster]

lmao, go back to deviantart

[farfenwaffle]

1.im confused about all this mental stuff so i ignore that

2i think the guy looks a little but to carttoony justmake some details and shade a little

[misterdog]

At 12/10/07 12:27 AM, TheRealGreenEagle wrote: Yea, I would, but fuckwads won't leave my thread, and I'm not going to post art just so its going to be flamed. All I ever wanted to know was how I could improve. I've got a little, so you guys can just fuck the hell off, go hump a dead rabbit or something. I aint posting here.

The only "fuckwad" here is you for getting pissed off because one guy says "learn to draw fagot" and you judged him without looking at his posts. You looked at his flashes, which are more artistic in movement, no aesthetics required. Only a stick figure.

Either way, his flashes look like spam flashes anyways so you're not supposed to take those seriously.

If you don't want to improve, go to deviantArt. They all give complements. If you do want to improve, quit acting like a fizz-bitch and just ignore ignorant spammers and wait for actual constructive criticism.

As for your characters, seriously look up anatomy. Look in a mirror and ask yourself if that's really how you look like. Even if it's cartoony, make the body parts actually resemble an actual body part. Legs don't look like two ovals and they definitely don't make up more than half of your torso. And where would his thighs be?

[Fatchaos]

Why on earth are you being such asses?
True, he has loads of parts to improve, most of which are still in the category of "basics of drawing".
But, you shouldn't expect him to get better with the comments you give him. He overreacted in the first extremely negative (and impropriate) comment, but that does not excuse your behavior now.
He is just easily provoked, like many people are.

If you really don't have anything constructive to say here, then don't bother saying anything at all.
Enough is enough...

[Eredar]

At 12/10/07 01:11 AM, misterdog wrote: The only "fuckwad" here is you for getting pissed off because one guy says "learn to draw fagot"

oh, right. so he should just let it go when someone gives him shit in his thread? thats not decent critisism, its just bullshit.