help with lyrics

[kensijo]

oh dear. omg i think i'm gonna get bashed for this but seriously, i need help guys. my gf is trying to win the fender stratocaster from the veronicas competition where she has to re-write the lyrics of the 2nd verse of their 'hook me up' song. check out the ugly guitar here www.theveronicas.com.au/
Its a horrible song of which i think they should change the whole lyrics to the song!! but yea, she's making me do it..

any suggestions???

[MisterSambert]

I dug my keys into the side
of his pretty little supped up four wheel drive
and I carved my name into his leather seats

Seems good. Took me like 4 hours to come up with them there lyrics.

[kensijo]

wow sorry to let u know u wasted 4 hours of hard thinking to come up with that only that i won't be able to use it as i doubt i'd win the guitar...

any more brainstorms?

[zombiefy1]

...asshole

[Cpl-Sylux]

At 11/26/07 07:58 PM, kensijo wrote: any more brainstorms?

go drink acid?

[Erect-Vagina]

At 11/26/07 01:02 AM, kensijo wrote: she's making me do it..

Quit being a bitch and tell her to do her own work.

[MetalZombie666]

Well, if you think it sounds like crap the odds of winning the guitar anyways are very small.

[kensijo]

anyone else with more ideas??? my partner is startin to bugg me now

[kensijo]

hello? anyone out there? help?

[towelie101]

At 12/9/07 09:59 PM, kensijo wrote: Help?

Help, I need somebody,
Help, not just anybody,
Help, you know I need someone, help.

When I was younger, so much younger than today,
I never needed anybody's help in any way.
But now these days are gone, I'm not so self assured,
Now I find I've changed my mind and opened up the doors.

Help me if you can, I'm feeling down
And I do appreciate you being round.
Help me, get my feet back on the ground,
Won't you please, please help me.

And now my life has changed in oh so many ways,
My independence seems to vanish in the haze.
But every now and then I feel so insecure,
I know that I just need you like I've never done before.

Help me if you can, I'm feeling down
And I do appreciate you being round.
Help me, get my feet back on the ground,
Won't you please, please help me.

When I was younger, so much younger than today,
I never needed anybody's help in any way.
But now these days are gone, I'm not so self assured,
Now I find I've changed my mind and opened up the doors.

Help me if you can, I'm feeling down
And I do appreciate you being round.
Help me, get my feet back on the ground,
Won't you please, please help me, help me, help me, oh.

[Unclemonty23]

Oh it's been getting so hard
Livin' with the things you do to me, aha
Oh my dreams are getting so strange
I'd like to tell you everything I see
Oh, I see a man at the back
As a matter of fact his eyes are red as the sun
And a girl in the corner let no one ignore her
'Cause she thinks she's the passionate one

Oh, yeah, it was like lightning, everybody was frightening
And the music was soothing, and they all started grooving

Yeah, Yeah, Yeah, Yeah, Yeah
And the man at the back said
Everyone attack and it turned into a ballroom blitz
And the girl in the corner said
Boy, I wanna warn ya, it'll turn into a ballroom blitz
Ballroom blitz, ballroom blitz, ballroom blitz
Ballroom blitz

I'm reaching out for something
Touching nothing's all I ever do
Oh, I softly call you over
When you appear there's nothing left of you, aha
Now the man in the back
Is ready to crack as he raises his hands to the sky
And the girl in the corner is ev'ryone's mourner
She could kill you with a wink of her eye

Oh yeah, it was electric, so frightfully hectic
And the band started leaving, 'cause they all stopped breathing

Refrain

Oh yeah, it was like lightning, everybody was frightening
And the music was soothing, and they all started grooving

Refrain

It's it's a ballroom blitz, it's it's a ballroom blitz
It's it's a ballroom blitz, yeah, it's a ballroom blitz

Hopefully no one will catch this

[towelie101]

At 12/9/07 10:05 PM, Unclemonty23 wrote: Hopefully no one will catch this.

"Ballroom Blitz" by Sweet

[Unclemonty23]

At 12/9/07 10:07 PM, towelie101 wrote:

At 12/9/07 10:05 PM, Unclemonty23 wrote: Hopefully no one will catch this.

"Ballroom Blitz" by Sweet

CURSES!