At 3/16/08 04:41 AM, Jurian wrote:
I could use tips on this.
yummm. some constructive crit:
the piano would be better if it was more lifelike, vary volume a little bit so that it sounds like someone playing piano. IMO that would be good, even with teh mood ur trying to get.
i thought the song progressed really well. careful not to make some of ur instruments get drowned out tho.
i liked the melody that ur electric guitar followed, but i didnt like the sound of the guitar itself. its jst... mehhh. too synthetic and too bland, i think. if u can try distorting that or finding another sound for it, that would be great.
the ending seemed a little abrupt, but that might be jst because its a WIP.
finally, i wish there were more ambient effects/sfx that would make the song sound more textured, IMO that would be sweet.
okeydoke, i have a short clip of a remix of "low" by flo rida im trying to make. its sounding like a breakbeat benny benassi song lol. what do u think? where should i go from here? i did teh chorus but im not sure what to do for the rest lol