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Response to Works In Progress Advice Thread! Jul. 4th, 2013 @ 06:31 PM Reply

  • The Beginning Loop 1
    The Beginning Loop 1 by Djeezus1

    Can't fit the whole thing; part 1.

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    2.50 / 5.00
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    Loop
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    Trance
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HELLO please let me know what you think


?DuBsTeP?

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Response to Works In Progress Advice Thread! Jul. 5th, 2013 @ 01:51 PM Reply

I don't know if I'm doing this right but...

  • Collab
    Collab by TacoMilagroIII

    First cut

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I've got most of the instruments where I want them, but I'm open to suggestions. But really I need opinions on the mix and mastering.

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Response to Works In Progress Advice Thread! Jul. 6th, 2013 @ 11:25 AM Reply

  • Mr Brightside/Somebody
    Mr Brightside/Somebody by raggd46

    Mr Brightside/Somebody acapella layered mix

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    4.05 / 5.00
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    Voice
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    A Capella
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    106 Views

This is pretty much finished, but I'm unhappy with the abrupt change from one song to the next at 2:15. Am I just being pedantic cause I've worked on it all morning or is there any suggestions to improve it?
Also any constructive crit about the rest of the song too would be much appreciated.

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Response to Works In Progress Advice Thread! Jul. 8th, 2013 @ 01:38 PM Reply

I needz le critism on first 3rd of le song I'm work on:

https://soundcloud.com/djcheesehead/she-said-its-not-her-fau lt-a


Check out my stuff in order to win a free hug

Click here for my cool music and stuff

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Response to Works In Progress Advice Thread! Jul. 8th, 2013 @ 05:14 PM Reply

So uhm i entered a remix competition for remember me
and this is it

  • Remember Me Remix
    Remember Me Remix by propfit

    So Capcom had A remix competition this is my entry

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    5.00 / 5.00
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    Drum N Bass
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But iv started thinking that i should make drum and bass more often

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Response to Works In Progress Advice Thread! Jul. 20th, 2013 @ 03:03 AM Reply

  • My Dick Your Dick
    My Dick Your Dick by TheBigWhiteVan

    Make me feel good

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    2.19 / 5.00
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    Song
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    Experimental
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    27 Views

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Response to Works In Progress Advice Thread! Jul. 22nd, 2013 @ 02:42 PM Reply

http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/listen/543844
I'd appreciate some input. I feel like I need to improve the melodies and some of the other elements in the song.


Posted in the wrong thread, oops.

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Response to Works In Progress Advice Thread! Jul. 27th, 2013 @ 12:34 PM Reply

Hey guys! I recorded a few songs and just wanted some feed back.. and I just want my music to be heard, I have a lot to say.
http://iamsam-sharman.newgrounds.com/follow
http://iamsam-sharman.newgrounds.com/


I recorded a few songs and just wanted some feed back..
http://iamsam-sharman.newgrounds.co m/

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Response to Works In Progress Advice Thread! Jul. 28th, 2013 @ 03:32 AM Reply

Hello everyone! I'm new to NG and the Audio Portal, and I would love to get some feedback in regards to my arrangement if anyone has time.

I've always loved the Green Greens theme from the Kirby games, and a few weeks ago I felt like rearranging it for orchestra. This is the mess I came up with. It could be cleaner, but I threw it together at like 2am.

  • Green Greens Arrangement
    Green Greens Arrangement by Sodapiggy

    [Jun Ishikawa] - Green Greens (Re-Orchestrated)

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    Genre
    Cinematic
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    11 Views

Thanks
~Soda_piggy

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Response to Works In Progress Advice Thread! Aug. 1st, 2013 @ 11:51 AM Reply

Hi guys please could you give me some feedback on this idea I started working on.

  • The Runs Runner
    The Runs Runner by 8-bitheroes

    Could this be worth developing further, who knows?

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    Video Game
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Response to Works In Progress Advice Thread! Aug. 11th, 2013 @ 08:19 PM Reply

Advice for final touches would be greatly appreciated!

  • rok/rol
    rok/rol by no-ma-designs

    A song of a remix.

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    4.44 / 5.00
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    Song
    Genre
    House
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    35 Views

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Response to Works In Progress Advice Thread! Aug. 12th, 2013 @ 06:03 PM Reply

If you like deep bass, relaxing melodies and a chill ambiance then you just might like my new track preview i just posted =D Ill be looking through this thread and giving people advice and feedback as well =) Looking forward to hearing everyone's sounds!

  • Ocean Glide (Preview)
    Ocean Glide (Preview) by alanisnotcool

    Preview of my latest track. Will be finishing very soon =)

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    House
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    4 Views

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Response to Works In Progress Advice Thread! Sep. 12th, 2013 @ 05:58 PM Reply

https://soundcloud.com/thecoatwearer/experiment-beat-alpha-sep-12
I'm making this in live 8 and so far it's pretty rough. These aren't all the instruments I plan on using.
How can I make this sound better?

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Response to Works In Progress Advice Thread! Oct. 8th, 2013 @ 10:19 PM Reply

http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/listen/552399?updated=1

This song has been giving me so much flak today and I really need some objective opinions on it to finish it. Please help me out!

PLEASE, I BEG OF THEE, LEND ME YOUR EARSSSSS

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Response to Works In Progress Advice Thread! Oct. 9th, 2013 @ 10:08 PM Reply

Hello, i would like to know what you guys think! c:

  • Work In Progress
    Work In Progress by ShiftingConix

    Progressive House

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    House
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Response to Works In Progress Advice Thread! Oct. 16th, 2013 @ 07:16 AM Reply

Please could you have a listen to this, its what i got so far, which isn't alot. My problem is #1 finding the right synth sounds to fit the tune and #2 finding a way to add more parts so it flows well. I am new to dnb and im having a difficult time making transitions that work in this style of song. That is why i have left it as is. Ideally i want some ups and downs and not to much repetition. All advice/honest opinions appreciated.
https://soundcloud.com/8-bitheroes/an-idea-so-far

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Response to Works In Progress Advice Thread! Jan. 11th, 2014 @ 07:58 PM Reply

Hello everyone on newgrounds.com. I have been posting on here for quite a few years. I have a relatively new Heavy metal band together called Damage Done. We play more melody influenced metal like Five Finger Death Punch, 36 Crazyfist, Metallica, In Flames, Atreyu.
We have recently released a song called Social Anxiety and would love to hear some feedback.

  • Social Anxiety
    Social Anxiety by DJRevenge

    Heavy Metal

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    5.00 / 5.00
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    Song
    Genre
    Heavy Metal
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    111 Views

Thank you for your time!

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Response to Works In Progress Advice Thread! Jan. 17th, 2014 @ 03:09 PM Reply

Here is mine. I'm out of inspiration! Please give me ideas!

  • Long time (Demo)
    Long time (Demo) by bolisa

    A demo for my upcoming song!

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    5.00 / 5.00
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    Song
    Genre
    Hip Hop - Modern
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    34 Views

Hope you like the 25 seconds!

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Response to Works In Progress Advice Thread! Jan. 20th, 2014 @ 04:46 PM Reply

I'm working on yet another song. Kind of a classic 90s trance feel lol. Let me know what you think. :)
http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/listen/564093

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Response to Works In Progress Advice Thread! Jan. 24th, 2014 @ 12:52 PM Reply

I hope you like this,

  • Cleanbeatz (WIP)
    Cleanbeatz (WIP) by PrettyboyZ

    A Demo for my upcoming song!

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    0 / 5.00
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    Song
    Genre
    R&B
    Popularity
    2 Views

Please give a review!