At 11/17/14 07:39 PM, Quarl wrote:
Dressed to kill. Heavy DNB :3
I reviewed it for youz:
I really should have taken your word when you said heavy DnB. Wow.
It took me a while to get a feel for the rhythm and melody because it seemed a little obscure at first, in my opinion. You might have been able to add more character to the voice in some parts if you known what I mean. Like around 1:13. I think you could add some dynamic (Not musical dynamic, but character dynamic) to the voice. It just kinda sounds monotone; but if that's what you're going for then you could consider making it more robotic-like instead. For such an intense song having a monotone, non-robotic voice without character kinda interferes with the whole mood you're creating. I think you've created that intense, chaotic and evil mood that's created with typical DnB. I really like it so far and Front Page is nothing to scoff at. Just a few suggestions from me is all.
It's a great song and I'm sure it'll be amazing in the end. Keep going!
Onto my song. I've remixed Cortez's battle theme from "Paper Mario: TTYD". It's about done I just feel that in some sections, the melodies work against each other rather than with each other. In the song, I've also created a custom bridge that uses my own melody. I would appreciate feedback so I can finish it and post it! If you need a refresher of what Cortez's original theme sounds like so you can make a comparison, I know for a fact you can find it on Youtube.
Anyway, here's mine:
Remix of Cortez's battle theme from "Paper Mario: TTYD"
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