Show me your style!

[Captain]

I'm a big fan of urban art and i dabble in graffiti every now and then, i want to see if the unique styles that some of you might have, and i'm trying to get better so any critisism or suggestions would be helpful.

i myself use two different styles. I tag the word BANE, now I don't think newgrounds supports illegal activities so lets keep it to sketchbook art, nothing off a wall

one thats industrial/metallic:

[Captain]

and one thats more organic:

[Blain-The-Pain]

I guess I'm graffiti illiterate, I never would have been able to guess that the second one said "Bane" if you hadn't told us.

[HahaBears]

sorry b-boy scrizzle but neither of them are legible, particulaily the first one

why is there a random L in the middle of it?

[Captain]

At 11/11/07 12:53 PM, Blain-The-Pain wrote: I guess I'm graffiti illiterate, I never would have been able to guess that the second one said "Bane" if you hadn't told us.

haha, sorry all my organic ones i intentionally make really obscure letters, maybe this will help you out, and yes i know the N isn't the greatest

[Boots65]

Nice work! ^__^ Here's a little scribble I did in fireworks in a few mins

meh, I know it's terrible, didn't spend too much time on it and I'm still a noob at grafitti......style, w/e

[Captain]

At 11/11/07 01:03 PM, HahaBears wrote: sorry b-boy scrizzle but neither of them are legible, particulaily the first one

why is there a random L in the middle of it?

sorry legibility is not what i strive for ;) Heres a translation for the first one to,
and it's not an L i was trying to tie in the N and the E, but i made the bottom thing stand out to much, i'm still working on a way to make Ns in a way i like (i just started writing BANE thats why i want the suggestions/critisism)