The Enchanted Cave 2
Delve into a strange cave with a seemingly endless supply of treasure, strategically choos
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COMPLETE edition of the interactive "choose next panel" comic
4.09 / 5.00 15,161 ViewsNote: I wasn't sure if this should be in Flash or Art so i posted in both.
I was just wondering what you people thought of my website :P, i decided from the very start to stick with nice subtle blues, but also to attempt to make it unique which i personaly think i did.
Would just like feedback please.
nice, i really like those blues, theres nothing really that i can say to improve it
People in the flash forum have been saying the background is to cluttered. What does the art forum think?!
As I guess there are 2 different opinions.
Background is a tad busy. Overall, it's not a bad site.
At 11/10/07 06:12 PM, Darkaxl wrote: People in the flash forum have been saying the background is to cluttered. What does the art forum think?!
As I guess there are 2 different opinions.
it is too cluttered. that site would need more time to load if you have so much detail in it.
when you add all the text and pics, there would be too much to look at, so yea, you should tone it down somehow.
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Oki thanks for the feedback , anyone have any idea's of toning it down though? when i take things of it seems to ruin it : (
Ok the update Here
I tried tinting the background images so it looked like they were blending into the background making the foreground stand out more.
/feedbackplease.
I wouldn't usualy bump on a normal topic , but seeing as i need feedback/critisism seems like the right thing to do ^^
At 11/11/07 02:45 PM, Darkaxl wrote: I wouldn't usualy bump on a normal topic , but seeing as i need feedback/critisism seems like the right thing to do ^^
I like, but the font's terrible! Choose something more modern... like BitStream that should work nicely
:3
Ok seeing as i've had a few crits involving the font i'll paste 3/1 Image with 4 different fonts, if some sort of vote could occur i'd appreciate it.
you should make the bottom tabs darker so the words are easier to see.
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Generally Mixing different fonts together is not a good idea, Try to make everything the same font, and play with the size, position, and darkness of the text
At 11/11/07 06:56 PM, Dookiemaister wrote: you should make the bottom tabs darker so the words are easier to see.
Ok i'll touch them up abit, And I think you got the wrong end of the stick they are example font's that i want people to chose the best. :P i don't plan on using all 4 xD
O also, I like the colour scheme, but I think it could be improved alot if you increased the contrast. Just to see what it looks like take your screenshot into photoshop and up the contrast. If you like it then u can adapt that into your design.
Also if you're daring put some of blue's complementary colour (orange) into it and see what happens
Yeah I was thinking of using the colour wheel theory :P , but orange and blue just reminds me of Ford and that isn't a good thing.