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mage progress 2007-11-03 17:02:34 Reply

hi. i just though i'd post my wip of this magey-thingy that im working on at the moment, and hopefully i will post more as i complete it :)

i know its only a wip, but critisism?

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Response to mage progress 2007-11-03 17:44:09 Reply

At 11/3/07 05:02 PM, Eredar wrote: i know its only a wip, but critisism?

looks good so far.
you might wanna fix up the thumb tho, it looks boxy.

tho too early to tell if anything else.

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Response to mage progress 2007-11-03 18:26:12 Reply

here, a bit of a test before i got to bed.

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Response to mage progress 2007-11-03 18:59:57 Reply

At 11/3/07 06:26 PM, Eredar wrote: here, a bit of a test before i got to bed.

Looks great, but please, please don't make his hair that blonde. Make it some awesome colour like dark red or purple.


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Response to mage progress 2007-11-04 05:06:52 Reply

At 11/3/07 06:59 PM, MiddleFingerRings wrote:
At 11/3/07 06:26 PM, Eredar wrote: here, a bit of a test before i got to bed.
Looks great, but please, please don't make his hair that blonde. Make it some awesome colour like dark red or purple.

dark red or purple? hmmm, i'm not so sure about that. i was thinking of making the hair a darker shade of blond, like more "golden" but hey, i'm open to suggestions

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Response to mage progress 2007-11-04 05:12:39 Reply

will u put glowing eyes, that would looks cool, and in the other hand is he holding the middle finger?


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Response to mage progress 2007-11-04 05:34:09 Reply

At 11/3/07 05:44 PM, kernalphage wrote: you might wanna fix up the thumb tho, it looks boxy.

I whole-hearthy and most utterly agree with no doubts in my mind what-so-ever.
Sadly, it still does. :(


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Response to mage progress 2007-11-04 05:46:18 Reply

At 11/4/07 05:12 AM, Gromuluss wrote: will u put glowing eyes

Yeah, glowing eyes, put some fire in his eyes, with smoke coming out of them too !


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Response to mage progress 2007-11-04 06:50:49 Reply

At 11/4/07 05:12 AM, Gromuluss wrote: will u put glowing eyes, that would looks cool, and in the other hand is he holding the middle finger?

glowing eyes? i might do that. no middle finger though.

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Response to mage progress 2007-11-04 08:24:09 Reply

whoops! i somehow managed to LOSE the .psd of the half-coloured version. ah well, i didnt like the book idea anyways...

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Response to mage progress 2007-11-04 08:54:41 Reply

Something about the hands look off, but I can't really say what it is. Try to round them a bit, but not a lot.

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Response to mage progress 2007-11-04 12:16:58 Reply

i still dont know about that staff, and yes, i do need to fix the hands, they still look shit.

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Response to mage progress 2007-11-04 12:20:56 Reply

That's pretty good. I like the staff better than the book.


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Response to mage progress 2007-11-04 12:31:15 Reply

At 11/4/07 12:20 PM, RabiesIsMe wrote: That's pretty good. I like the staff better than the book.

ohh!!
i see it now! that's not a giant middle finger.... it was an open book!

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Response to mage progress 2007-11-04 12:32:25 Reply

At 11/4/07 12:31 PM, kernalphage wrote:
At 11/4/07 12:20 PM, RabiesIsMe wrote: That's pretty good. I like the staff better than the book.
ohh!!
i see it now! that's not a giant middle finger.... it was an open book!

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Response to mage progress 2007-11-04 13:15:04 Reply

looks very good, bu you sold design his face...

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Response to mage progress 2007-11-04 16:13:39 Reply

At 11/4/07 01:15 PM, Tenzen wrote: looks very good, bu you sold design his face...

well, having the hood saves me from drawing a face, which i am totally crap at.

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Response to mage progress 2007-11-04 16:18:16 Reply

awesome, work a bit on the fingers, or to ease your work, put glowes on it and don't do detail on it but make them look like real fingers,
the staff, don't make it straight make it wooden and curly, in-perfect
and i cindof especialy like the chain detail below the hood :D


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Response to mage progress 2007-11-04 18:01:16 Reply

more changes.. feedback?

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Response to mage progress 2007-11-04 18:14:01 Reply

At 11/4/07 06:01 PM, Eredar wrote: more changes.. feedback?

looks like you took stuff away

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Response to mage progress 2007-11-04 19:47:58 Reply

At 11/4/07 06:16 PM, xXsharkxsayxhelloXx wrote:
At 11/4/07 06:14 PM, reality-monkey wrote:
At 11/4/07 06:01 PM, Eredar wrote: more changes.. feedback?
looks like you took stuff away
That counts as a change.

Indeed it does

Anyways, I like where this drawing is going. Keep us updated =)

Same here. I really like that last copy the best, really nice. Keep it up.


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Response to mage progress 2007-11-04 21:18:36 Reply

At 11/4/07 08:24 AM, Eredar wrote: whoops! i somehow managed to LOSE the .psd of the half-coloured version. ah well, i didnt like the book idea anyways...

looks like a potential killer -REAPER- for halloween to bad it passed, and try no hair, with a mysteryious face, itll be a touch of scary o.o


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Response to mage progress 2007-11-05 11:21:02 Reply

or do you think i should do it like this? i need some feedback, because.... i really dont know what to do.

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Response to mage progress 2007-11-05 11:26:39 Reply

better, but i still don't like the straight staff in his hand


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Response to mage progress 2007-11-05 12:04:05 Reply

At 11/5/07 11:26 AM, Gromuluss wrote: better, but i still don't like the straight staff in his hand

yeah, well i'll fix that later, im just using it as a placeholder for now

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Response to mage progress 2007-11-05 12:25:43 Reply

Give him some evil glowy Todd McFarlane eyes.

It looks really nice right now, hope to see it colored soon. =]


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Response to mage progress 2007-11-05 14:54:25 Reply

awesome, kinda reminds me of the wraiths form lord of the rings, but with hair ;)


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Response to mage progress 2007-11-05 16:56:01 Reply

At 11/5/07 12:25 PM, BlackmarketKraig wrote: Give him some evil glowy Todd McFarlane eyes.

yes, i may have to :)

nothing beats spawn eyes
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Response to mage progress 2007-11-05 17:18:28 Reply

At 11/5/07 12:25 PM, BlackmarketKraig wrote: It looks really nice right now, hope to see it colored soon. =]

coloured? like this?

(i havent really coloured it, this was just a test.. ;) )

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Response to mage progress 2007-11-05 17:22:53 Reply

I think you should go for a darker red with black fingers, and keep the...rings? But hey, that's just me.


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