Help make Jedi pic plz

[iamnecromantic]

I'm making a tribute to Jedi vs. Ninja and I'm having trouble with making the Jedi's face (the face I made looks like crap and the hair is worse), or redo the whole thing if you want. the ninja is based off of xonic demon's Kasharu Xion because i'm using xonic's animation style. below is a picture of the Jedi so far and soon i'll post the finished (though editable if you have suggestions) ninja. general style must remain the same, 'cause i'm NOT animating arms & legs. this is my first flash and i'm not even gonna try it.

[iamnecromantic]

Alright, here's the ninja, i might not use this, the hair might be a problem. sorry if i disgrace Xonic or ActiveObjectX, but in my defense, i was really really bored.

[iamnecromantic]

Oh crap I forgot the pic (lol)

[DestroyerofMan]

At 10/27/07 11:46 PM, iamnecromantic wrote: Oh crap I forgot the pic (lol)

I really don't like that style personally. It just looks shitty to me.

[frigginjake1]

At 10/27/07 10:43 PM, iamnecromantic wrote: I'm making a tribute to Jedi vs. Ninja and I'm having trouble with making the Jedi's face (the face I made yle must remain the same, 'cause i'm NOT animating arms & legs. this is my first flash and i'm not even gonna try it.

you dont need an awesome face... even keeping it blank would be fine, and more artsy

[iamnecromantic]

At 10/28/07 12:26 AM, frigginjake1 wrote:

At 10/27/07 10:43 PM, iamnecromantic wrote: I'm making a tribute to Jedi vs. Ninja and I'm having trouble with making the Jedi's face (the face I made yle must remain the same, 'cause i'm NOT animating arms & legs. this is my first flash and i'm not even gonna try it.

you dont need an awesome face... even keeping it blank would be fine, and more artsy

it wouldn't work without a face. look at the origanal movie, facial expressions replace dialog (which I am NOT going to do, too much work on a project that was already impossible. i say was because I recently found out what tweening was), so i'm at least putting that in. it;s not so much the face that bothers me as it is the hair. it's just not right with him bald, just my personal preference.

Cabbster: it isn't ripped off of rayman it's ripped off of rayman it's ripped off of dark light

here's the jedi with the face I made (again, can't get the hair right. it might even work if i could get the hair in)

[hijackreaper]

the head is too round. here:

[narf]

At 10/28/07 01:20 AM, hijackreaper wrote: the head is too round. here:

meh to be honest i'd rather he went with the circle head. I don't think he should make the jaw line pointy like ur tutorial or the top of his head flat as a pancake. I like the circle head better srry.

[StoneColdSoul]

At 10/28/07 01:20 AM, hijackreaper wrote: the head is too round. here:

Oh dear lord, you are not aloud to make tutorials.

[hijackreaper]

At 10/28/07 01:24 AM, StoneColdSoul wrote:

At 10/28/07 01:20 AM, hijackreaper wrote: the head is too round. here:

Oh dear lord, you are not aloud to make tutorials.

i did it in ten minutes. it's not supposed to be a piece of art. i'm just showing him how to do it.

[StoneColdSoul]

At 10/28/07 01:26 AM, hijackreaper wrote:

At 10/28/07 01:24 AM, StoneColdSoul wrote:

At 10/28/07 01:20 AM, hijackreaper wrote: the head is too round. here:

Oh dear lord, you are not aloud to make tutorials.

i did it in ten minutes. it's not supposed to be a piece of art. i'm just showing him how to do it.

If you're going to show someone something, make sure that what your showing them is going to benefit them for the good. To help them improve. This won't do shit.

[skreetch]

I can't draw

[LaserKarl]

At 10/28/07 01:20 AM, hijackreaper wrote: the head is too round. here:

I vote worst tutorial ever.

[Blain-The-Pain]

At 10/28/07 10:22 AM, skreetch wrote: I can't draw

Well, I like the body anyway.

[UnknownFury]

At 10/28/07 01:20 AM, hijackreaper wrote: the head is too round. here:

Yours is too square.

Add shading.

[Undertone]

At 10/28/07 10:22 AM, skreetch wrote: I can't draw

Then iether stop complaining or don't try.
You've got some serious scale problems here anyway, the hands are bigger than the feet, both of which look like blobs of flesh. Unles your jedi's barefoot and the recipiant of severe burn damage, you should probibly put a bit ore detail into him, considering you don't have to mess around with limbs.

[pauljs75]

I know this is just plain wrong, and more than likely a travesty towards fans of the StarWars universe. But I couldn't help myself.

[rc-95]

You could just add eyes to make it a face & you could add a line for the mouth aswell

[iamnecromantic]

At 10/28/07 02:30 PM, rc-95 wrote: You could just add eyes to make it a face & you could add a line for the mouth aswell

that's what I did, look at the pic i posted. anyway, i'm looking for hair more than a face, my face is just crappy and I might as well get one with the face.