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Krayon's art thread. 2007-10-26 03:53:26 Reply

I feel like getting some critique for my drawings, so please comment ppls.
This is my latest piece of art. It took me about 2 or 3 hours to do and is my third sculpture. It's titled The Demons We Fight. and represents the head of a demon which is on a pedestal for show, like what old time hunters would do with their prey. Also the demon is supposed to represent that which is within us, the nastier bits which we strive to defeat, and so it asks the question, "I've beaten my demon, have you?" All my own work. I used no templates and did not use any models, I started with an icosphere and went on from there. I used Blender 3D and mainly concentrated on the actual head rather than anything else. Rate as well as advise, if you want to say your first imressions please do so. If anyone has advise feel free to say it, please.

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Response to Krayon's art thread. 2007-10-26 03:55:01 Reply

its cool cuz is 3D but it has no detail


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Response to Krayon's art thread. 2007-10-26 03:55:10 Reply

Wow, Blender eh? Amazing work man, especially for Blender, you have a lot of talent. Makes me want to actually spend time on 3D sculpture and animation.


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Response to Krayon's art thread. 2007-10-26 03:56:53 Reply

Thanx, its not hard you just need a fast computer and a little bit of tiem and patience.
I'd need to know how to colour in Blender before adding colour detail but I'll work it out eventually... =D


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Response to Krayon's art thread. 2007-10-26 05:06:07 Reply

At 10/26/07 03:55 AM, MiddleFingerRings wrote: Wow, Blender eh? Amazing work man, especially for Blender, you have a lot of talent. Makes me want to actually spend time on 3D sculpture and animation.

I heard that Blender is actually a really powerful program. It just takes getting used to.


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Response to Krayon's art thread. 2007-10-26 10:55:31 Reply

At 10/26/07 03:55 AM, Gromuluss wrote: its cool cuz is 3D but it has no detail

it has quite a bit of detail, but its more bumps, not hard details. It looks decent.

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Response to Krayon's art thread. 2007-10-26 11:49:25 Reply

blender is a good programe.

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Response to Krayon's art thread. 2007-10-26 22:57:53 Reply

Yes it is, it just takes time getting used to the hotkey/interface setup.


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Response to Krayon's art thread. 2007-10-29 02:42:35 Reply

Sorry for the double post, but I had to bump it... My favourite type of drawing is to do medieval weaponry and or fantasy of around the same era, this was supposed to be the nastiest sword I could make, but I'll probably make nastier sometime.

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Response to Krayon's art thread. 2007-10-30 02:39:15 Reply

One of my other fantasy swords, I might make a digital version, but not until I get a graphics tablet. Comments please.

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Response to Krayon's art thread. 2007-10-30 23:46:27 Reply

Could someone please comment!


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Response to Krayon's art thread. 2007-10-30 23:50:49 Reply

At 10/30/07 11:46 PM, Krayon wrote: Could someone please comment!

Curse you and your 3d rendering abilities!
I am inept with blender. :)


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Response to Krayon's art thread. 2007-10-31 01:25:14 Reply

I come here expecting crayons, yet I get well modeled 3D figures?

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Response to Krayon's art thread. 2007-10-31 02:14:38 Reply

Nice work with the demon head, no critiques, but a little texture would be nice. I don't really like the swords, though.

I see so many sword drawings on NG and they all look the same, detailed doodles of an asymmetrical sword that's supposed to look 'badass', But they just look untidy and silly.

Try drawing someone/something holding a dangerous sword, I don't mean a small guy with a huge anime sword. But take away the little details, add a little something to make it unique, then put it in something.

You can't have a nasty looking sword on it's own. You have to put it in a nasty position, you can make a soup spoon look "nasty" if you draw it being rammed down someones throat.

Go for it :)

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Response to Krayon's art thread. 2007-11-04 00:13:08 Reply

Bleh. It's a warm-up.
Comments please.

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Response to Krayon's art thread. 2007-11-04 01:19:07 Reply

Anatomy needs a little work, but still good, and nice shadowing on your last image, really good. Swords look really nice, I prefer the lower one, the not evil one.

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Response to Krayon's art thread. 2007-11-06 00:17:20 Reply

This is the second face i ever really drew.
comments please.

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Response to Krayon's art thread. 2007-11-06 12:39:33 Reply

At 10/26/07 03:53 AM, Krayon wrote: I feel like getting some critique for my drawings, so please comment ppls.
This is my latest piece of art. It took me about 2 or 3 hours to do and is my third sculpture.

you need to either make the toung a lot better or get rid of it, and make the head longer

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Response to Krayon's art thread. 2007-11-06 21:19:53 Reply

I've been posting these last few images so that I can find out what I need to work on with my drawing, as I'm doing a character portrait I need to know my shortcomings so they can be corrected. So please make comments (or the art on this thread will just be mediocre). These two pictures took me about 5 - 10 minutes each and were just sketches about 3 cm in size. Comment Please.

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Response to Krayon's art thread. 2007-11-06 21:22:26 Reply

it looks nice
Is it supposed to be grey?


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Response to Krayon's art thread. 2007-11-06 21:22:53 Reply

Sorry for the double post, need to get this in. Comments please.

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Response to Krayon's art thread. 2007-11-08 00:42:18 Reply

My Best and my first character protrait!
Thanks to all those who commented before. As to those who didn't...
*Glares at everybody else*
*Then smiles*
Hope Ya like it!

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Response to Krayon's art thread. 2007-11-08 00:47:43 Reply

At 11/4/07 12:13 AM, Krayon wrote: Bleh. It's a warm-up.
Comments please.

You ninja'ed my Helmet design!
I like his ax.


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Response to Krayon's art thread. 2007-11-08 00:49:49 Reply

Whoa... Awesome drawings, The first one lookes mad weird + creepy, but for everything else you get a thiumbs up from me...


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Response to Krayon's art thread. 2007-11-08 00:52:15 Reply

At 11/8/07 12:47 AM, Vousielle wrote:
At 11/4/07 12:13 AM, Krayon wrote: Bleh. It's a warm-up.
Comments please.
You ninja'ed my Helmet design!
I like his ax.

Thanks, that helmet designs been really popular since LOTR lol.


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Response to Krayon's art thread. 2007-11-08 00:53:40 Reply

At 11/8/07 12:52 AM, Krayon wrote:
At 11/8/07 12:47 AM, Vousielle wrote:
At 11/4/07 12:13 AM, Krayon wrote: Bleh. It's a warm-up.
Comments please.
You ninja'ed my Helmet design!
I like his ax.
Thanks, that helmet designs been really popular since LOTR lol.

Yeah, pointy is the style lately, it would seem. I was grasping for inspiration during CAP, I just don't draw fantasy often.


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Response to Krayon's art thread. 2007-11-08 01:13:57 Reply

Hmmm, I'm thinking of posting something on the CAP: Fantasy thread, ya think I pass?


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Response to Krayon's art thread. 2007-11-08 01:18:41 Reply

At 11/8/07 01:13 AM, Krayon wrote: Hmmm, I'm thinking of posting something on the CAP: Fantasy thread, ya think I pass?

Sure! You've got 'mad skillz'


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Response to Krayon's art thread. 2007-11-08 01:36:37 Reply

At 11/4/07 12:13 AM, Krayon wrote: Bleh. It's a warm-up.
Comments please.

the characters look really really flat as if they were made of blankets,

you need to work out the shapes on those bodies.

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Response to Krayon's art thread. 2008-02-04 23:36:17 Reply

Been a while since I added anything so please forgive the double post... And the wrinkles, an unfortunate accident...

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