Something I did in flash

[Anustan]

This girl on newgrounds wanted her picture drawn so I took her picture and drew it. Tell me what you think.

[ZeeAk]

Do you honestly swear to God that you made that ONLY in Flash?

[HahaBears]

try not tracing?

[nirvelyar]

At 10/25/07 08:05 AM, HahaBears wrote: try not tracing?

Yeah, but it still is pretty good, try not making some bits too scetchy.

[Xotic]

lol, good trace :P

[Hammi]

Lol i think ive seen her at the art forum numerous times. Shes the one with too much make up XD Looks quite slick for flash. Even tho its traced, i guess this is good for a start :)

[insipidmortal]

At 10/25/07 06:55 AM, Anustan wrote: This girl on newgrounds

your story has holes

[uyersuyer]

The nose is ridiculously horrible, you gave her an ass-chin, and overall she looks like she's made of very sharp polygons.

If you have to trace, at least do a good job next time.

[nellieness]

OMG! thats wicked!!!!
i love it! and of course my notourious arse chin!!!! one of the things i have to inherite of my father...
this is freaking awesome, its gonna sooo be my new myspace pic ^^ thank you loads!!!!

[nellieness]

Shes the one with too much make up XD

im sorry but how much makeup was i wearing????
this is pissing me off actually with half you guys thing that mascara and eyeliner is too much effing makeup.
go into town find yourself a skeffy chav girl and see how much makeup shes wearing, i guarentee that they have a orange line round they're face.
this is great and to the other guy, i have a messed up nose and a bum chin, thats me, too much kickboxing and bad genetics im afraid. the picture looks great.

[uyersuyer]

At 10/25/07 12:07 PM, nellieness wrote: this is great and to the other guy, i have a messed up nose and a bum chin, thats me, too much kickboxing and bad genetics im afraid. the picture looks great.

Alright, to be more specific, the outlines of the nose look horrible. The picture tries too hard to be faux 3D and the nose is done with barely any shading and these huge, ugly lines. It looks really out of place.

Plus your actual chin doesn't form a lowercase N. He made the ass-chin aspect too prominent.

The art forum is meant for critique; no one can ever improve if you just tell them their picture is awesome and you love it.

[nellieness]

At 10/25/07 12:10 PM, uyersuyer wrote:

At 10/25/07 12:07 PM, nellieness wrote: this is great and to the other guy, i have a messed up nose and a bum chin, thats me, too much kickboxing and bad genetics im afraid. the picture looks great.

Alright, to be more specific, the outlines of the nose look horrible. The picture tries too hard to be faux 3D and the nose is done with barely any shading and these huge, ugly lines. It looks really out of place.

Plus your actual chin doesn't form a lowercase N. He made the ass-chin aspect too prominent.

The art forum is meant for critique; no one can ever improve if you just tell them their picture is awesome and you love it.

thanks, it just pisses me off with the makeup thing, ok my critique is that the hair could be a little less sketchy, i dont actually mind the bum chin prominence even though its not exaclt liek the picture like a very mild version of a caricature, making feature of a person stand out more, sorry i know ive posted loads of here but this will be my final one unless i get pissed off again ^^

[darth13]

That isn't drawing that's trasing...... also try using a pencil next time it's much easier.

[Hammi]

At 10/25/07 12:07 PM, nellieness wrote: i have a messed up nose and a bum chin, thats me, too much kickboxing

Uh-oh shes pissed! Please dont rush me! Not in the face! Not my beautiful nose! xP

Ok but seriously, i think ill go with uyersuyers statement about the camera flash making your skin pale and washed out because it sounds very logical. I guess it didnt quite hit me in the first place. Im gonna take back what i said about you wearing too much make up. Mistakes do happen :)

[nellieness]

At 10/25/07 12:38 PM, Hammi wrote:

At 10/25/07 12:07 PM, nellieness wrote:

Ok but seriously, i think ill go with uyersuyers statement about the camera flash making your skin pale and washed out because it sounds very logical. I guess it didnt quite hit me in the first place. Im gonna take back what i said about you wearing too much make up. Mistakes do happen :)

yes mistake do happen, now get get ready for an ass whooping!! nah im joking i over reacted anyway, but i accept the apology. thank you, i realised that most of you guys dont know what a real girl looks like cause all the porn your ever really need is on the mature section on NG.

<small>Im a real girl!

[pspmad]

Thats not traced who even says its trace is a asshole.Thats art of thee humans and is VERY GOOD!!!!!!!

[Hammi]

At 10/25/07 01:04 PM, pspmad wrote: Thats not traced who even says its trace is a asshole.Thats art of thee humans and is VERY GOOD!!!!!!!

Lawl speak for yourself. Obviously you have no idea what youre babbling about kid. Im sorry if im ruining your moment here but THIS PICTURE IS TRACED FROM A PHOTO THAT SHE POSTED. Lil dumbass.

[uyersuyer]

At 10/25/07 01:04 PM, pspmad wrote: Thats not traced who even says its trace is a asshole.Thats art of thee humans and is VERY GOOD!!!!!!!

It's not what now?

[nellieness]

ooh ooh look look i can change between reality and creation im like south park and the world of imagination wooooooooooooooooooooo!
this is sooo fun!
soo are you trying to say it WAS traced then?? im so confused my emotions have changed to many times in a short period of time, my mind is mush...

[uyersuyer]

At 10/25/07 02:30 PM, nellieness wrote: ooh ooh look look i can change between reality and creation im like south park and the world of imagination wooooooooooooooooooooo!
this is sooo fun!
soo are you trying to say it WAS traced then?? im so confused my emotions have changed to many times in a short period of time, my mind is mush...

Yeah, it's a trace. The picture fits almost perfectly over the original.

You can tell he put effort into the shading and coloring, but it's pretty obviously traced. :/

[Anustan]

Yes, its a trace. When I posted this picture, I expected it to be assumed so I didn't mention it. I wasn't expecting so much controversy over one picture so I will take the time now to apaologize for upsetting everyone. I hope you don't think that I do this kind of thing all of the time. This is the first time I've traced anything and, thanks to the folks here at newgrounds, the last time. I would also like to apologize to nelliness. You must feel decieved at the moment and I must tell you that that was never my intention. I just wanted to make you a cool picture. I'm sorry for the trace; I wasn't expecting it to be such a big deal.

P.S. I'm also sorry for the sketchy hair; I'm not very good with that.

[sirtom93]

wow thats good.

[crazerfish50]

oh god, i've seen this before......

do i even have to say it?

[iamgrimreaper]

At 10/25/07 12:07 PM, nellieness wrote: Shes the one with too much make up XD

im sorry but how much makeup was i wearing????

*cough*refrrence*cough*

[wadethejuggalo]

this is the orignal i found it

[Superior7]

The nose is weird, the right side of her face (our left) gives the impression that her hair is over her face when it isn't, her chin is messed up, and the way you did her hair makes it look pleathery (yes, with a 'p').
Also, I don't know what you guys are talking about with the make-up. I guess you guys have never seen women in real life before, because that's nothing.

[Gromuluss]

the pic is amazing, and u idiots who say he traced, he was suposed to trace
if what he said is true "she asked me to make a pic of her" in this case the picture is PERFECTLY, AMAZINGLY AWESOME!

[SmilingIdiot]

wow all these people "found" the pic.....how awsome?.......its a trace in flash and looks pretty bad ....all said in a positive way

[pspmad]

At 10/25/07 01:09 PM, Hammi wrote:

At 10/25/07 01:04 PM, pspmad wrote: Thats not traced who even says its trace is a asshole.Thats art of thee humans and is VERY GOOD!!!!!!!

Lawl speak for yourself. Obviously you have no idea what youre babbling about kid. Im sorry if im ruining your moment here but THIS PICTURE IS TRACED FROM A PHOTO THAT SHE POSTED. Lil dumbass.

k stfu u bastard u have no meaning over its not traced if it is idc its still art u friggin fuck head

[GeminiX7]

At 10/25/07 10:07 AM, insipidmortal wrote:

At 10/25/07 06:55 AM, Anustan wrote: This girl on newgrounds

your story has holes

Brilliant!