What do you think?

[joza1]

this is a crappy ms paint drawing that just came to me i was bored you can probably tell

[test-object]

"MS Paint drawings had better be funny and well thought out or else may be removed. "
Straight from the rules. Read them, they're really interesting...

Unless you really are that inexperienced. Then I gotta say: Dang, work on about everything...

[joza1]

thnx thats my first really useful tip and it might not look it but i did think it out

[Blain-The-Pain]

At 10/22/07 03:45 PM, joza1 wrote: thnx thats my first really useful tip and it might not look it but i did think it out

The nose is huge. Where are his ears? There's not much detail, but it could be worse. .

In conclusion: Always put as much detail as you can into your art. Maybe get a trial version of Flash or Photoshop?

Hope this helps.

[joza1]

At 10/22/07 03:59 PM, Blain-The-Pain wrote:

At 10/22/07 03:45 PM, joza1 wrote: thnx thats my first really useful tip and it might not look it but i did think it out

The nose is huge. Where are his ears? There's not much detail, but it could be worse. .

In conclusion: Always put as much detail as you can into your art. Maybe get a trial version of Flash or Photoshop?

Hope this helps.

thnx again i'll try and do something better in the future and i did try and do ears but they looked weird with a black background

[Fatchaos]

Good. Oh, and if you dont like trials versions, you can always use Paint.Net, its not photshop excatly, bu gets the job done. And its free.

[Hammi]

At 10/22/07 02:53 PM, joza1 wrote: this is a crappy ms paint drawing that just came to me i was bored you can probably tell

Yes indeed its crappy. I mean, look at the shoulders. You can see that the proportions are off at first sight. And dont be so dependent on the line tools on ms paint. Also, its not so funny or entertaining. And the rules say... TSK TSK TSK. You better put more effort and try again asap, otherwise this might get locked, or idk.

[joza1]

At 10/22/07 07:32 PM, Hammi wrote: Yes indeed its crappy. I mean, look at the shoulders. You can see that the proportions are off at first sight. And dont be so dependent on the line tools on ms paint. Also, its not so funny or entertaining. And the rules say... TSK TSK TSK. You better put more effort and try again asap, otherwise this might get locked, or idk.

i dont really care if this gets locked i just needed to know where to improve- pretty much EVERYWHERE from the sounds of it

[joza1]

At 10/23/07 04:29 PM, PrinceFlea wrote: I do Agree that it is crappy but It's your first picture It should not look like picasso. For a few advises I advise that you should study something like anatomy and drapery/cloting in your community college or by looking at a few photos from a few stock gallery morges,Add a little more time and detail on shading or lighting into your work.

thnx and you've been on my profile before! YAY! (i think you commented on the killing spree game )

[BlackmarketKraig]

At 10/22/07 02:56 PM, test-object wrote: "MS Paint drawings had better be funny and well thought out or else may be removed. "
Straight from the rules. Read them, they're really interesting...

Unless you really are that inexperienced. Then I gotta say: Dang, work on about everything...

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