what do you guys think of this

[archsalveos]

it's a drawing i have that i want everyone to look at so tell me what you think o.o?

[archsalveos]

id really appreciate it if you guys gave me some feedback i want to know o.o?

[Vortex00]

At 10/11/07 09:56 PM, archsalveos wrote: id really appreciate it if you guys gave me some feedback i want to know o.o?

heh.. give us a chance to look at it man. 5 min is too soon to bump

especially with no new material >.>;

pretty good line work imo, but some of the wrinkles are out of place though.
I like the detail in the flowers but the monotone color you used in them kind of kill it.

[AdudenamedVince]

It's...... Different.

[13psyched]

Nice picture, The detail of the roses are really in depth which is a positive, and the splashes of pink in the drawing really brings attention to it. I like the style, Nice work.
-Psyched

[UltraPulse]

Looks like someone forgot the tampon >_>

[NekoMika]

At 10/11/07 09:51 PM, archsalveos wrote: it's a drawing i have that i want everyone to look at so tell me what you think o.o?

That actually looks great.

[archsalveos]

alright thanks guys i really appreciate the feedback so far but id like more o.o

[archsalveos]

She must have lost her tampon. Mass murder can be kind of distrcating. And god forbid she might of broke a nail in all this. What has this world come to. o.o

[BlackmarketKraig]

Looks good, but what is she covered in? Looks like liquid bubblegum or something. Blood, if that's what it's supposed to be is much darker and when it soaks into your hair your hair clumps together, hangs straight down, and gets really dark.

the pose is good, I don't see any real anatomical issues, apart from the stylization and those gigantic breasts. I don't think the jeans on her left leg look very good.

Over all very nice but there is always room for improvement.

[poxpower]

Her hair is weird, it looks like she's wearing a cape because of where you put the blood on her head. It separates the hair into two pieces.

[Vousielle]

Work on placement of folds in the cloth, otherwise, the lines are clean, and the proportions are right, I think you have a winner.

[TheSilverSerpent]

At 10/11/07 11:27 PM, BlackmarketKraig wrote: Looks good, but what is she covered in?

Looks like someone dislikes the clock crew...

Blood, if that's what it's supposed to be is much darker and when it soaks into your hair your hair clumps together, hangs straight down, and gets really dark.

Very interesting that you know that...:O

the pose is good, I don't see any real anatomical issues, apart from the stylization and those gigantic breasts. I don't think the jeans on her left leg look very good.

Since when were gigantic breasts a bad thing in anime? Just joking.

Over all very nice but there is always room for improvement.

I totally agree. Sorry for quoting you all over the place, BlackmarketKraig, i just really agreed with it.

[Gromuluss]

this is good, as everyone said already the wrinkles, the roses are wery well done, but the hair...
you dedicated alot of lines to the front hair, to the back one is just an outline...
alltogether, id' only put a bit more pink on the front hair, a few more lines, and viola that would be great

[MindChamber]

At 10/11/07 09:51 PM, archsalveos wrote: it's a drawing i have that i want everyone to look at so tell me what you think o.o?

not bad, what did you use to color it with.

[Havayosunu]

At 10/11/07 09:51 PM, archsalveos wrote: it's a drawing i have that i want everyone to look at so tell me what you think o.o?

very good pic but... why should anime girls always have DD boobs? I mean, female warriors should not have uncomfortably big boobs, even ancient amazons cut off their right breasts to aim their arrows well, while riding a horse.

[nellieness]

At 10/12/07 10:02 AM, Havayosunu wrote:

At 10/11/07 09:51 PM, archsalveos wrote: it's a drawing i have that i want everyone to look at so tell me what you think o.o?

very good pic but... why should anime girls always have DD boobs? I mean, female warriors should not have uncomfortably big boobs, even ancient amazons cut off their right breasts to aim their arrows well, while riding a horse.

let me tell you (im a girl) them tits are waaaaaay bigger than DD, why does everyone suddenly think that big boobs HAVE to be DD's?? if she got measured shes more likely be a HH-J
just to let you know of some "proper" female anatomy 8)

[RabiesIsMe]

At 10/12/07 11:08 AM, nellieness wrote:

let me tell you (im a girl) them tits are waaaaaay bigger than DD, why does everyone suddenly think that big boobs HAVE to be DD's?? if she got measured shes more likely be a HH-J
just to let you know of some "proper" female anatomy 8)

Thank you for that educational short on tits.

As for the picture, it looks quite nice. I agree with most of the small problems listed above so I won't bother complaining about that. Really nice picture.

[archsalveos]

again thanks guys for your opinion also i would like more reviews so until then o.o

[Ninja-Assassin]

damnnnn good!!!!!!

[Winned]

At 10/11/07 11:27 PM, BlackmarketKraig wrote: Looks good, but what is she covered in? Looks like liquid bubblegum or something. Blood, if that's what it's supposed to be is much darker and when it soaks into your hair your hair clumps together, hangs straight down, and gets really dark.

I completely agree with that, the blood is too much of a pink color, it's weird. You should make it red and it looks like the top of the hair was dyed or something since it's only on the top of the head it looks like a different section of hair.

[fofizzle]

An anime character covered in Kool Aid? Awesome!

[Gorefest5]

the blood (if thats what it is) needs some work, other than that its awesome