what could i improve on?

[LordAdon]

i am starting on deppre#3, an i need to know what i could improve on, check thisout.

its not done, and i wont show clips of the video yet, but plz help.

ALSO!
i tried to make the blood scratches fade by adjusting the alfa every keyframe, could someone tell me how to make it fade inbto transparent, like a tween?

http://www.ngup.net/view.php?file=4351_w ar%20hero

[Rammer]

make the blood scratches a movieclip. click on them, go down to your Properties panel, and look under the "Color" dropbox. click alpha, set it to 100, then go to the frame you want to to fade out on, make a keyframe there, go to your properties panel for the blood, and drag the alpha slider down to 0.

[Mehrdad14]

Everything.

Art.
Code (Learn AS2 a bit basics then QUICKLY move to AS3).

[BlackmarketKraig]

Definitely needs improvement in all areas, if the title screen is anything to go by. Unless you have really great writing/printing don't use it, use a font instead.

You didn't really show much, so I can't comment on your animating abilities, the art on the title page is mediocre, passable ibut not memorable or very good.

I think the loop of the red scratches is pretty unnecessary and looks bad just appearing and fading. The changing blur levels on the characters head is pointless, keep it static.

Okay start, needs improvement.